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averagereaderman
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(Story Development) The story development is far worse than what anyone ever says it is. About 150 chapters in, the MC is invincible and not even China’s government does anything about him. He also extorts China for useful minerals, information, and abuses his power. He then heads to find the “hidden sects” but already realizes he’s pretty much the best of the best in his generation. He then fights it out with another cultivator and falls off a cliff where his side chick and him have a little love time. (Character Design) Horrible. Absolute trash. Ning Qingxue (mc’s side girl) turns into a mindless love slave trying to find MC and almost gets herself killed most of the time. She **coincidently** finds a shadow of MC and another person fighting (the cliff area) and sees him fall off. SHE GOES INTO THE FOREST THAT IS BLOCKADED BY THE MILITARY TO TRY TO FIND THIS SLIVER OF HOPE HER YOUNG HERO IS THERE. If it wasn’t for the fact I wanted MC to find his master (girl) and tell her his feelings I would have never read past Chapter 100. Actually, I was hoping that Ning Qingxue died in the forest so we wouldn’t have to go through this and could finally let MC be a free man. (World Background) The whole story doesn’t make sense. At first, MC says the chi/qi is too thin on Earth and it’d be a miracle if you were to get to Chi Gathering 1 stage, but we clearly read that there are more powerful people than MC and they are 30 yrs old. ????????. (Writing Quality) 1/5 - author don’t try to make a story like this again

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ThrustThunder
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When the writer of the Dao of Filler is calling your novel trash, you need to take a long, hard look in the mirror and wonder if your Ancestors are still smiling upon your life choices.

RonaChan
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XD

ThrustThunder:When the writer of the Dao of Filler is calling your novel trash, you need to take a long, hard look in the mirror and wonder if your Ancestors are still smiling upon your life choices.
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hahahahaahahha~

ThrustThunder:When the writer of the Dao of Filler is calling your novel trash, you need to take a long, hard look in the mirror and wonder if your Ancestors are still smiling upon your life choices.
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👍

Solonius
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I totally agree with this. The author writes trash. I don't know if this novel is a harem, cultivation or otherwise. And the author makes a lot of unnecessary and unneeded killings that it becomes annoying

TOKiYO
TOKiYOLv4TOKiYO

the funny part is, im currently reading at the part where si jingwen or whatever met her cousin,xie something , when I read your comment. just 2 3 chaps back since he fell.

averagereaderman
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I was so invested in this story that I ended up completely dropping it after this review. I’m a lot less angrier now though. 😅

TOKiYO:the funny part is, im currently reading at the part where si jingwen or whatever met her cousin,xie something , when I read your comment. just 2 3 chaps back since he fell.
TOKiYO
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Idk about you but I'm at chap 320 and as long as the author didn't messed up too bad, I might continue reading.

averagereaderman:I was so invested in this story that I ended up completely dropping it after this review. I’m a lot less angrier now though. 😅