Review Detail of mzhammer07 in The Wizard World

I had very high hopes starting this book...... long story short it was not up to par. The story is pretty interesting at first but thats it.... ive read up to chapter 150 and i am still not happy. There is no depth to the story and instead the story bounces all over the place and get dragged out way to long. It shouldn't take 5 chapters to describe one event that doesn't pertain to the main story arc. The word building is excellent and has a lot of potential, however its ruined by the low end story telling and if your looking for action, you'll find some every 25+ chapters.....