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FartArtPupil
FartArtPupilLv26yrFartArtPupil

30 chapters - DROPPED I registered only to write this review, why! Cuz I'm mad for wasting time reading 30 chapters, The story is one of the best, good ideas, low, yet acceptable world-building; but the plot, logic, motive, character development, are all crap! Please forgive my offense but the author could have given us a beautiful fantastic work but he hurriedly pulls crap from God knows where and magically the 14 years boy becomes a badass in a few days, yet it could be acceptable to 10 years olds if he at least provided a justification, then a series of "matter of fact"s are thrown all over the place, add more "beauties" " save the father" and "run from the enemy" well, the young guy now is an expert after a few days_ and here you are, a very immature stupidly mustered plot with no motives, no details, no development. This is a light novel, I'm not expecting something by Dostyvasky, nevertheless; the author needs to be aware of a very minor little detail called "LOGIC" I refrained from mentioning details for spoilers, and I gladly wholeheartedly kiss goodbye for this lovely amazing work. DROPPED.

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Thanks for giving it a try and i'm sorry that you're disappointed about the novel, I hope you could find other novels you like on the site. :D

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FartArtPupilLv2FartArtPupil

Appreciate your kind replay and your open attitude for feedback, I hold nothing but respect for any translator, my words were solely directed to the author, and with great anticipation awaiting your next project.

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