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vire
vireLv37yr
2018-03-19 08:08

Very bad, I have no idea how people are rating this 4-5 stars. - MC is a soulless sociopath, as is his father. - Side characters are not bad, unfortunately MC gets a lot of them killed for no reason and feels no guilt for it. - Very similar to WMW, in all the wrong ways. WMW might as well be borderline plagiarism of this story, except in WMW *everyone* is a sociopath, whereas here it's just the MC & dad (as of ch 20). - MC's power progression involves him watching people swing their swords, copying it with the AI chip, then eating some fruits and crap that boosts his strength but magically doesn't do anything for anyone else. A few weeks later he is the strongest person in the castle. - Basic inconsistencies all over the place. MC's dad travels 10 days to a mine, MC catches up within hours on foot. MC also magically scans his father from 13 kilometers away using AI chip, despite it repeatedly being established that the AI chip uses MC's senses to detect things. MC goes to woods to catch a bear that his father publicly killed the previous chapter. Author has absolutely no respect for consistency or fact checking. - Pseudo-waifu's all over the place approaching MC for ***. No downside to it, except MC claims he "can't have *** or it will interfere with the development of his body." - As extension of above point, MC is supposed to be from the future but is evidently completely ignorant of technology and biology. He also never once thinks about or mentions his entire past/future life, even though it's ostensibly the most interesting thing about him. It's hard to tell if the characters are just that shallow, or if MC is actually mentally handicapped.

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papanobita
papanobitaLv5

Thanks. I will not read this novel.

WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4

This LN was written before MWM. MWM totally copied this LN in many ways.

Elder_Hill
Elder_HillLv11

Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.

WhiteDragon32:This LN was written before MWM. MWM totally copied this LN in many ways.
WhiteDragon32
WhiteDragon32Lv4

I haven't really noticed any inconsistencies.

Elder_Hill:Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.
Elder_Hill
Elder_HillLv11

hm ok thx. gonna give it a try

WhiteDragon32:I haven't really noticed any inconsistencies.
bananasuitbrian
bananasuitbrianLv14

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Daoist_Hong_Fa
Daoist_Hong_FaLv12

oh wow

Elodin
ElodinLv11

Haha, what you described is actualy why I love WMW :D

JingleBell
JingleBellLv5

Maybe you should read more chapters then make a review I hate someone who read 10 or 20 chapters and make a review. It is more like someone just eat Durian in the first time and make a review about it.

Just_a_person
Just_a_personLv5

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GrandGuardian
GrandGuardianLv5

This is the original The World of Wizards is the first to be release but Warock Magus World got translted first

FilledWithHope
FilledWithHopeLv5

Yes, it is.

Elder_Hill:Thx for the review. wanted to ask if its realy that bad on the inconsistencies? does it get better? If not im gonna skip this one.... cause if i hate something in novels is if a autor doesnt check his OWN facts.
The_Unholy_One
The_Unholy_OneLv13

Ur just a snowflake

Aoshi319
Aoshi319Lv5

"might as well be borderline plagiarism of this story," thought i would point out the author of WMW is The Plagiarist lol

Sand_Whale
Sand_WhaleLv12

I read around 30 chapters and then dropped it exactly because of the points you listed above. It’s good to see That others see this novel in a similar way as i do, and I really can’t understand the higher star rating.

Facu03Dragneel
Facu03DragneelLv5

Thank

SageDaoist4
SageDaoist4Lv3

i just want to ask about the #rape tag mention here.

Quetzalcotal
QuetzalcotalLv4

The story feels like dragged out a lot due to MC being stuck in Rank 1 for almost 300 chapters but after that it rushes . By the end of the story he reaches Almost peak Rank . Which is just 300 chapters more .

Aaron_Evelyn_1005
Aaron_Evelyn_1005Lv1

I haven’t read it yet but I appreciate critics because I get to see the truth of the book before hand, thank you for your input truly; imma still try it out and if it’s really that bad after chapter 30 I’ll come back 🤟🏿

ScionOfDegeneracy
ScionOfDegeneracyLv4

you made me wanna read this.

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WisH
WisHLv6

Based on chapters 1-244,I would start off with the story general plotline being similar to WMW or Warlock of the Magus world if you have read that. Many reviews would comment on that and some agree that it is very similar. I just want to highlight that the reviewers have said that this came first so from that it is assume that WMW have potentially copied the aspects from this novel rather than this novel copying WMW. However, because this novel have less translated chapters than WMW and WMW being in a more prominent position in reputation, people assume that this novel is just a copycat. I just want to mention this point because alot of the new viewers need to know that the novel is not a copycat and WMW is not a copycat either because nothing in the world is truly original. Many work done by people have aspects from other activities. This novel compared to the WMW is just like Harry potter and Lord of the rings, both have magic and villans that is super overpowered. I know the comparison is not one to one while WMW with this novel is super similar, but the MC do things quite differently, for me WMW MC is more cold and machine like while the MC here is more human like but less clever. *Minor spoiler, WMW MC is colder for me because he don't really appreciates his family while this MC does so that speaks alot of words.* But sometimes I question the decision made by this MC more as he makes more mistakes which could be good as it shows his human side. For me, this novel and WMW is similar to Power Rangers from my childhood,Power ranger always follows the same principle, have the rangers and the villains fighting one another and the rangers winning fight at the end of the day but people still watch that because the side story and how the rangers achieve their powers is what attracts viewers so the path taken by MC is similar but what they did and how they achieve it is different. Overall the storyline is turning out great as each motive is back-up and their is good progress, world background have potential for having ancient times and modern age incorporated as well as having multiple continents to explore, Character is on par with WMW, maybe better on the personality side but lacking in history of the character (have to wait), the updating stability and translation quality is 3 stars for me as it is not overly fast like other novel at 20 but it is still good enough already and there is a few grammar mistakes(such as not knowing who the MC is addressing his message to and etc) that affect the story a little bit but generally understandable and the experience is not affected. This novel is rated above average in my library and it is really good to read it thinking that it is like another path that the MC with computer chip in his soul can take. Although the future development is unknown for me as I have not read the raw but I guess that it will be as great as WMW is. Good work Translator, a baby step now, a general in the future! Ps. This is my first review ever so I may not write a very good and accurate review but I hope it helps to attract you to read this novel without too much spoiler. English is my second language so sorry for any inconvenience! :)

Zefelina
ZefelinaLv5

Review as of ch 42: I don't know if it's the novel or the translation (though I suspect it's the novel itself) but so far I dislike the main character and all the supporting ones. Nothing is clearly explained, story jumps around from chapter to chapter without clearly explaining whys or hows. The story itself is similar to Warlock in the magus world, but the writing style and immersion quality are totally different (I heard that Warlock was written after this novel but its hard to believe). The main character gets stronger basically by eating stuff that everyone else also eats but his body is somehow different. About side characters: basically girls follow him for the benefits and offer themselves to him whenever they need smth from him but the main character always holds himself back even if he secretly likes them. Aside from the girls there is the father (I totally don't get their relationship - in the beginning he's disappointed in his son, later when the son somehow gets as strong as him nothing is questioned). It feels like side characters are only there to give reasons as to why the main char is moral, strong, loves family, etc. There are so many inconsistancies it's not even funny. In one chapter the assessment for school is in a month, in another half a year already passed and the main char charges other students tuotion fees that are 5 times more than the primary teacher fees, everyone is useless in combat and the only teacher that can teach smth useful (languages) is the only one who has connections with wizards that he himself doesn't know about. And somehow that teacher has a daughter who I suspect willalso try to spread her legs for the protagonist only for him to refuse to do anything.

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