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lehur
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MC wayward, enemy became brother. Thing like smiling, caring, kneeling toward enemy was honor, I wonder how moron he was? He even more care toward enemy than his wife, just count how many elixir, fruit he gave to enemy compare to his wife, well at least he gave his wife essence seed.

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Realms In The Firmament

Feng Ling Tian Xia

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lehur
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Are you talking about Bai abd Binger ib Mortal Realms (I read all the way by RAW), and there is no option to change chapter I read to what I read on RAW, so what's appear only 600+ chaps. I am not gonna spoiler it, so read 1000+ then comments again will yeah

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lehur
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You'd misunderstood many things. 1. MC no wisdom for romance, he said it explicitly in novel. 2. MC by no means a powerhouse (only he thinks like that aka clown). As loose cultivator, being uneducated, he only know Daoyuan, again I'm not talking about Bai, I talking about powerhouse in his past life, that he never meets (Xuan Bing and co). 3. About Logic (it would never end, if I writing it.......too many being too many unlogical, why it happens then, solely for plot. Author make different root with Emperor Domination (MC was truly powerhouse with a whole wisdom of powerhouse). Root that author took (MC strong, but many flaw, being uneducated loose cultivator) 4. E.g. He trapped Daoyuan, smashed his head, he used many mortal weapon, he surprised it did not killed him. Unlogical he also Daoyuan, why not knowing how tough his skin at that time, if not accidently he grabbed an egg, he would be dead. 5. E.g. being no wisdom over 1000+ years old, he took over auction, make enemy all the world, the trouble bexame bigger, he asking for help to a kid who no more than 18 years old to solve it. 6. Being no wisdom in past life, he gain truth, that this life he wanna got all thing that he did not have in the past, so; A. Not having parenting - he act like a kid to his mom and dad who no more than 40+ years old, but he over 1000+ years old, he truly love them, spoiled them 24/7. B. Not having country - he gonna make enemy all world, spoiled the king, loyal to the king (being hypocrite, of course he don't want someone said he's servant/eunuch of king, so he said he did it, just beacuse his house locate in that kingdom, so it called homecountry) He truly love his country 40+ billion, enemy all world, unlimited elixir to make king more stronger, more healthy, and more life for 100+ or 1000+ years, for him (king) to make many son. He truly love the king, too bad he's man, if woman, I absolutely sure he'll gonna marry her, like a guy on ttnh (author other novel, about a guy meet prince (actually princess who in disguise) all the same which is the first country, the first place/mortal realms where he got second life, but not the same in here gender man, in ttnh gender female. C. Having girlfriend in past life who always awaited him, so he will not/difficult to accept any girl in this life (love debt), again being hypocrite, he is, he ended up accept them all. D. Unlogical, MC constanly surprised about cultivation (He Daoyuan why he surprised, so unlogical) but very reasonable because author take the root/route about strong cultivator with dumb brain. He's totally different with Li Qiye who have motto "Nothing is impossible, because I am Li Qiye!" and have slogan "Not enough to reach the Apex" E. Conclusion; I do not like his personality trait; Wayward---Hypocrite---Easily changed (not firm believe)---dumb---no brainer. F. Why I'm read it, you may ask, coz It'd the same plot with Zhanxian (back to the past, revenge). MC in Zhanxian not only not forgiving his enemy he did it very thoroughly. Constantly making that sect lose many treasure and culrivator, kill with borrow knife, making that sect being chipped little by little, killed one by one, to the point all cultivator in that sect being terrified, and of course making scheme, so that sect become enemy of all world cultivator, and in the end to be killed by alliance of all cultivator, and he/MC only sneaking to the treasure house to looting with not even dust remains. G. Summarize; Maybe there're many who ask how did that dude also Daoyuan. +++MC have good cultivation technique +++MC have a firm mind, focused on cultivation only and stay virgin till the end of time Mode +++MC have treasure radar ability, whatever forbidden place he went in, no different than his backyard with seemingly auto map. So he constantly eating treasure like duck. +++MC constantly fighting. He's type of people who get treasure with fighting, he know he have no brainer, so he only ways which's a fight.

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lehur
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Exactly, repetitive absolutely, the reason I read it for story of adventure/fantasy. The same for other novel. E.g. RITF the reason because I wanna see how MC struggle, Confront, and.... this is from its synopsis "He will use the powers he cultivated in his last life and slaughter his way back into the Realm. The story begins!". But, I dissapaointing, I know my score truly underrated it, but anyway its my score. But RITF to has its advantage, which is its adventure and fantasy story how he eventually become dominator in the future. Which is also the same as Li Qiye (that's why its title Emperor's Domination) tho both pretty much exact opposite. ---ED, MC searching for salvation (He want to defeat all his enemy and their minions. His enemy feeding on world civilization to become stronger (that's why there're so many ruins and backstories in it). I use term salvation because Li Qiye, true wish was to die, from his eternal damnation, he said. So, basically it's battle between good and evil, demon and god. ---RITF, he wanna become stronger simply because a bet, yeah bet, so it's practically a game the winner takes all, there're no good and evil, just player. My bad, I guess I spoil it, well I already write it, so be it.

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Efthee
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didnt know this was a review of the raw. if u were going to review a raw go the the site which has raw lmao

lehur
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No, it's not specially for the RAW, coz "MC wayward" started from synopsis and went on through the end. (actually I ain't gonna spoil, but nevermind) ----Synopsis (...slaughter....fighting for resources for fairness for loose cultivator...3 sects doing monopoly). [MC fighting for justice to end the monopoly of 3 sects, we can see, how author portrait MC as justice man, aka xianxia robin hood] ---1-10 chaps (wayward 001, MC fighting because 3 sects pretty cruel, they're killing a few country billions massacre, solely for refining treasure, how author portrait MC as punisher) ----20+ chaps (Wayward 002, MC fighting for revenge, his brother has been murdered) The Reason changed/added. ---another wayward and unlogical, that happens 1-600 chaps has been explained few in my comment. And the climax part 001, happens when MC meets guys from 3 sects, but.....everything happens from synopsis to 700 chaps thrown to garbage, MC smiling with open arms brother, master, I wanna become discipline. (imo, maybe because chinese censorship, so parts about revenge changed to benevolent, fyi many novel have been banned by Qidian chinese, banned means erased all chapters)

Efthee:didnt know this was a review of the raw. if u were going to review a raw go the the site which has raw lmao
carlossgf
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thanks for the translation

Dantez
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He has never knelt towards an enemy. Are you even reading this? And he is not just giving away his stuff! He has also received and has given more because 1 he doesn’t wish to owe anything to him and 2 because he wants his enemy to owe him a favor. They are opponents and there isn’t hatred between them. Basically the depth of this novel can’t penetrate that hollow skull of yours.

YOUNG_REAPER
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Dantez:He has never knelt towards an enemy. Are you even reading this? And he is not just giving away his stuff! He has also received and has given more because 1 he doesn’t wish to owe anything to him and 2 because he wants his enemy to owe him a favor. They are opponents and there isn’t hatred between them. Basically the depth of this novel can’t penetrate that hollow skull of yours.
lulu5006
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I feel disappointed for binger character 😿. Is she going to be a good girl?

lehur:Are you talking about Bai abd Binger ib Mortal Realms (I read all the way by RAW), and there is no option to change chapter I read to what I read on RAW, so what's appear only 600+ chaps. I am not gonna spoiler it, so read 1000+ then comments again will yeah
ColdWinterKid
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How old was he when he died? I imagine him to be a talented arogant 20-30 yr old before he died. He never joined any powers in the Qingyun Realm limiting his world views and always avoided girls and gets flustered acting like a kid limiting his maturity at the time. Also he can cassually give those things cause he didnt work for it, like taking things given for granted. Also he knows what those are,just that he doesnt have a choice since they can just squash him and needs those as leverages or he just doesnt know the real actual value of it up in the hifher realms since he never got to widen his horizons before he died.

lehur
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Around 500-1000 years, he is senior in cultivation world and at that time because he was loose cultivator, he know nothing about higher realms, so he thought that he's the pinnacle (he ain't young man). He like gut im bersek, have no talent and background, but he has somekind of radar to detect treasure nearby, so no surprise he got to the top, but took very long time of struggles (yes, to take thetreasure he battle and offend left and right, and accumulated enemies

ColdWinterKid:How old was he when he died? I imagine him to be a talented arogant 20-30 yr old before he died. He never joined any powers in the Qingyun Realm limiting his world views and always avoided girls and gets flustered acting like a kid limiting his maturity at the time. Also he can cassually give those things cause he didnt work for it, like taking things given for granted. Also he knows what those are,just that he doesnt have a choice since they can just squash him and needs those as leverages or he just doesnt know the real actual value of it up in the hifher realms since he never got to widen his horizons before he died.
xedanyne
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Is this worth reading?

Floki
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Rushed ending. Every potential reunion scenes are cut off. Every romances are cut off. MC's rival turn into ally for no reason. Happily ever after...

digvijay
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Ohh

khalil_mekahlia
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Hope it's worth my time

digvijay
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Done

radams
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Gg

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Gg

Exodus47
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well, i understand you but every wuxia novel is like that.

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Exodus47
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there are no romance in wuxia novel.

lehur:You'd misunderstood many things. 1. MC no wisdom for romance, he said it explicitly in novel. 2. MC by no means a powerhouse (only he thinks like that aka clown). As loose cultivator, being uneducated, he only know Daoyuan, again I'm not talking about Bai, I talking about powerhouse in his past life, that he never meets (Xuan Bing and co). 3. About Logic (it would never end, if I writing it.......too many being too many unlogical, why it happens then, solely for plot. Author make different root with Emperor Domination (MC was truly powerhouse with a whole wisdom of powerhouse). Root that author took (MC strong, but many flaw, being uneducated loose cultivator) 4. E.g. He trapped Daoyuan, smashed his head, he used many mortal weapon, he surprised it did not killed him. Unlogical he also Daoyuan, why not knowing how tough his skin at that time, if not accidently he grabbed an egg, he would be dead. 5. E.g. being no wisdom over 1000+ years old, he took over auction, make enemy all the world, the trouble bexame bigger, he asking for help to a kid who no more than 18 years old to solve it. 6. Being no wisdom in past life, he gain truth, that this life he wanna got all thing that he did not have in the past, so; A. Not having parenting - he act like a kid to his mom and dad who no more than 40+ years old, but he over 1000+ years old, he truly love them, spoiled them 24/7. B. Not having country - he gonna make enemy all world, spoiled the king, loyal to the king (being hypocrite, of course he don't want someone said he's servant/eunuch of king, so he said he did it, just beacuse his house locate in that kingdom, so it called homecountry) He truly love his country 40+ billion, enemy all world, unlimited elixir to make king more stronger, more healthy, and more life for 100+ or 1000+ years, for him (king) to make many son. He truly love the king, too bad he's man, if woman, I absolutely sure he'll gonna marry her, like a guy on ttnh (author other novel, about a guy meet prince (actually princess who in disguise) all the same which is the first country, the first place/mortal realms where he got second life, but not the same in here gender man, in ttnh gender female. C. Having girlfriend in past life who always awaited him, so he will not/difficult to accept any girl in this life (love debt), again being hypocrite, he is, he ended up accept them all. D. Unlogical, MC constanly surprised about cultivation (He Daoyuan why he surprised, so unlogical) but very reasonable because author take the root/route about strong cultivator with dumb brain. He's totally different with Li Qiye who have motto "Nothing is impossible, because I am Li Qiye!" and have slogan "Not enough to reach the Apex" E. Conclusion; I do not like his personality trait; Wayward---Hypocrite---Easily changed (not firm believe)---dumb---no brainer. F. Why I'm read it, you may ask, coz It'd the same plot with Zhanxian (back to the past, revenge). MC in Zhanxian not only not forgiving his enemy he did it very thoroughly. Constantly making that sect lose many treasure and culrivator, kill with borrow knife, making that sect being chipped little by little, killed one by one, to the point all cultivator in that sect being terrified, and of course making scheme, so that sect become enemy of all world cultivator, and in the end to be killed by alliance of all cultivator, and he/MC only sneaking to the treasure house to looting with not even dust remains. G. Summarize; Maybe there're many who ask how did that dude also Daoyuan. +++MC have good cultivation technique +++MC have a firm mind, focused on cultivation only and stay virgin till the end of time Mode +++MC have treasure radar ability, whatever forbidden place he went in, no different than his backyard with seemingly auto map. So he constantly eating treasure like duck. +++MC constantly fighting. He's type of people who get treasure with fighting, he know he have no brainer, so he only ways which's a fight.