Item: Timeless Assassin
Rating: 1.8
Author: Bad_romance

Bad_romanceLv131mth

2025-04-03 21:50

An Honest review here. (Spoiler alert) Currently at chapter 86. This novel started out fairly good, but then start shaping up pretty mediocre. Firstly there’s no background build up. The MC seem to be in different universe but yet earth still exist, while he is on a different planet no advance tech or inter planet travel is even mention. Even Gods exist in this world. Yet MC is in an academy training to be assassin ? The MC doesn’t have any memory(most likely to add mystery to the novel) but retrieved a lil back which makes him able to fight. He was better without his memories as he was more of an assassin now he is like a try to prove everyone his the best. & became arrogant. The Tag academy should’ve been added cause it’s clearly just a novel Thats focus on academy daily life as far as I read. Have no idea how old the MC Is but given his in an academy his probably young? Yet he is a wanted world criminal ? And he is to save the universe? While the writing is averagely decent, the story, mystery and world building could’ve been way better and has way more potential to be BEtter but author lacks imagination or creativity. I will give this novel a 2/5.

Timeless Assassin

Raj_Shah_7152

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301 Chs

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Raj_Shah_7152Author

Hey. Thanks for the review. The points you raised are valid. But that's because this is a sequel. His journey from Earth to here, Why is he a wanted criminal and Him being an assassin are all parts of book one. But to not let any readers miss context, We start with a memory loss, with all those bits being revealed with time. I think if you read till his second memory package arrived, you would get all these points, but that's like 70-80 chapters more into the book from where you've left. In any case, that's my bad.

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Raj_Shah_7152Author

Since I designed this novel as a stand alone which people should be able to read and enjoy without context of book one. I absolutely agree that I should have done a better job of explaining the points you just mentioned earlier into the book and not as late as 150 chaps. I definitely deserve this 2/5 review. I should've done better here

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Bad_romanceLv13

My comments are meant to make you improve, not discourage. What is the name of book one?

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PancakesWitchLv13

you replied to yourself, not the author, so he likely didnt read your message, the first novel is: Terra Nova Online : Rise Of The Strongest Player

Bad_romance:My comments are meant to make you improve, not discourage. What is the name of book one?

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