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2025-03-09 16:06

I really love this book, i also like how most of the plot holes which might have been there aren't e.g him not having the ancient swamp frog egg and things of that nature. Also i like how you dont waste chapters covering things that could be covered in terra nova. (I love your books, i've been reading them since strongest guild master)

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Novels like this make me wish I was put in a coma, and when I wake up it’s all finished and there for me to binge read in peace. I’m about to be 100 chapters into the novel and so far it’s great. Writing quality has been steadily increasing over the last 3ish years of the authors writing, and so has the plots and said plots’ planning. The update stability makes me want to marry the author. I’m serious. I wake up and BAM, 3 chapters daily. I love you. Im about to go into a rant, but before one reads this, please note that it is the ONLY issue with the novel. I am 100% honest with this too, so yeah. Nothing is perfect. One thing I would critique is an excessive amount of inner monologue filling up majority of a chapter every now and then, or a chapter or two full of lore drops teaching something that, while relevant to the story, is something that us readers as people will never use. This applies to all novels and stories I guess, but still, me laying in bed in this boring world of plain laws of reality doesn’t need to know about the fundamentals of mana circulation for a whole chapter. If it was an anime it would be different, coz it would look cool, but in written format it is still cool, but forgettable. Teaching about lore that is relevant to the story itself though would be an exception to this issue of mine. I think it is just this author’s writing style, but yeah, some chapters just feel dragged on a single detail or though instead of progressing the story or what’s happening in it. That is is though. That’s the ONLY complaint I have. writing all that is just me going into detail about the one and only issue I can find. Well, maybe the lack of badass cool female characters too. Please add women that don’t get overshadowed by the average man in future plots. Even the strongest of the strongest can be a woman this time man😭big muscular men are overdone, give some variety. Okay that’s 2 issues, that’s it. Out of 100 aspects, 98/100 are amazing and those 2/100 are issues. Also I believe no one who rates the novels on here knows what a 5 star rating is lol. Even the best literature of the modern world rarely has 5 star reviews. Okay I’m done.

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