One thing i can say abt this fic is that, Author has good writing potential. Read abt Chap 23. Author Clearly Split the Story With Two Sides . On One Side, 2 Broke Girls are written Great. Banter is excellent, Dialogues are seamless. 8/10. On Other Side that Focus on Mc's Story is Trash. Specifically Hollywood Side. I mean why bother If going so half-baked. From Script Writer to Producer to Director ?! in one sitting . Winning 5 Oscars in 5 years. Author Skipped so many elements shrugged it off as Probably System which is the worst Excuse. Even DiCaprio had to work for two decades to Win One. What Abt allowing him to be a director without directing experience ( Even though he could've started as Asst.director ). Then process like pre production - Post Production are skipped over. It wouldn't Change all much if he was reborn Rich. maybe Reborn in Friends ( Brad Pitt's character was bullied kid turn into hot character who used for guest ep ) / Two & Half Men / Big Bang x 2 Broke Girls Crossover. That way author could've switched two sides back & Forth. Since that seems right up his alley so far. You still have a good writing Potential. Do not skip developments if you're going to introduce one .
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