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Vlad_6413Lv31mth
2025-01-31 20:51

New review because the Fanfic became awful. The story itself is not bad but the grammar definately is. Also chapters release in wrong order or are completely unreadable and need a rework. Without some fixes it is just not worth reading.

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Malyari_MakisigLv14

From what chapter did it start to be in the wrong order?

Vlad_6413Lv3

By about chapter 70. Could be that it has been fixed in the meantime, but i dropped it there.

Malyari_Makisig:From what chapter did it start to be in the wrong order?
Malyari_MakisigLv14

Still at chapter 60, so I'll see to it if that's still the case.

Vlad_6413:By about chapter 70. Could be that it has been fixed in the meantime, but i dropped it there.
lucifer_pendragonLv14

hey any update?

Malyari_Makisig:Still at chapter 60, so I'll see to it if that's still the case.
Malyari_MakisigLv14

Yeah, I'm already at 136, no worries about the wrong order, it's been fixed.

lucifer_pendragon:hey any update?
lucifer_pendragonLv14

nice thanks. btw hows the novel?😅

Malyari_Makisig:Yeah, I'm already at 136, no worries about the wrong order, it's been fixed.
Malyari_MakisigLv14

It was Good. Just a bit baffle at how much they wank Susanoo and downplay the Douluo World. Plus a bit bummed up that there's still no update yet.

lucifer_pendragon:nice thanks. btw hows the novel?😅
lucifer_pendragonLv14

oh damn[img=angry]

Malyari_Makisig:It was Good. Just a bit baffle at how much they wank Susanoo and downplay the Douluo World. Plus a bit bummed up that there's still no update yet.
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