a good novel, over all its really good. The writing quality is quite good, the story is developing quite smoothly without any problem, character design is also good, updates should be good idk I read the whole fanfiction in one sitting, world background is well thought. and please don't add multiple partners for mc the current one is quite perfect. the chapters are really long for people who are looking at the chapter. it's been a fun read I hope you continue writing in ur free time. if you need any help then please don't hesitate to ask.

I really like both the story and the writing style. Keep up the good work and hope you will write using this fast schedule so I can read this :D

Personally, I highly recommend this story as I have found it highly entertaining. The main character is a very likable individual who has the advantage of a system, but also works hard himself. The world is Harry Potter, yes, but also very much unique and that it has cultivation style elements with magical individuals able to get much stronger than in the original story, and crossover elements of other stories. The main character also makes some very useful connections that help him on his journey to become more knowledgeable and a much stronger individual, well also forging his own path. The magical battles are very well written and highly entertaining, edit certainly has me excited to see the main character grow further in knowledge and power. As said in the beginning, I definitely think this story is worth you giving it a try, at least the first 10 chapters, since I doubt many would be disappointed. Could be it’s not your cup of tea, that can be true for many different types of stories, regardless, I think it’s worth finding out for yourself.

The characters don't feel real enough and the interactions seem a little forced. With the MC being too timid and the thought process seeming to jump around I don't think I can continue

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A fantastic work that while partially based on Harry Potter’s world (at least for now) with hints of marvel, offers a very unique and original experience. I really liked the changes made by the author and the world he’s creating. The writing is engaging, the character interactions feel natural, and the plot is both thrilling and unpredictable. The way the different elements merge enhances the story rather than overwhelming it, making for an exciting read. My only complaint? I wish there were more chapters! The anticipation for each update is real, and I can’t wait to see where the author takes the story next.

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I usually don’t right reviews but I have to say this has to be one of the best fan fiction I have ever read.

i highly recommend it because it's plot progress and character development etc is very good and stable along with it we have so far regular updates.i hope it becomes so popular that we can get daily update or maybe twice a day