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JDonSauvage
JDonSauvageLv132mth
2025-01-06 09:47

Surprisingly well written and suprise of surprises, well edited. So far, cliche, but sufficiently well played clichés that I am willing to keep reading, hoping for a well turned phrase or a startling conceit. 8/10 so far. I will observe author-kun's efforts with great interest. Suprise me!

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Caffeinated_Seraph
Caffeinated_SeraphAuthor

Thanks for the first review~! I'll try and keep this level of quality at least!

The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

Is this harem or single fl, r18, yuri, ntr??

Caffeinated_Seraph:Thanks for the first review~! I'll try and keep this level of quality at least!
Caffeinated_Seraph
Caffeinated_SeraphAuthor

I'd say you check the tags, but... Anyway. R18? Nothing as of yet, and not sure if any will appear in the future... Yuri? Nope. NTR? Nope, for sure. And whether it's harem or not... only time will tell (not like there's clues in the character profiles, right?) 🤣

The_True_KING_:Is this harem or single fl, r18, yuri, ntr??
The_True_KING_
The_True_KING_Lv13

yh lol there was no tag saying harem or no-harem, r18 or not so i just asked lol

Caffeinated_Seraph:I'd say you check the tags, but... Anyway. R18? Nothing as of yet, and not sure if any will appear in the future... Yuri? Nope. NTR? Nope, for sure. And whether it's harem or not... only time will tell (not like there's clues in the character profiles, right?) 🤣
Xl0k0X
Xl0k0XLv1

though i want to say that i dont have a preference i do have to say that one of the things i hate the most is when a character has a lot of dialogs and you start wanting it to be part of the family, then the author simply throw's the character out the window simply because it isn't a harem and just like that every single thing the character and everything it did or says ends up in the garbage to be forgotten and that ends up meaning that such a good character just got completely wasted, and that infuriates me so much that i have stopped reading many novels because of it. i understand not wanting to do a harem but if it isn't a harem then at least dont give a throw away character so much importance, like so many times ive read side characters that are so much better than the wife that the author decided is going to win despite being so poorly written and barely having a relevance to the story but the author decided that with the power of his heavy balls and ends up ruining the novel just for that.

Caffeinated_Seraph:I'd say you check the tags, but... Anyway. R18? Nothing as of yet, and not sure if any will appear in the future... Yuri? Nope. NTR? Nope, for sure. And whether it's harem or not... only time will tell (not like there's clues in the character profiles, right?) 🤣
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