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PagE_PickErLv119d
2025-01-01 01:41

This novel is excellent so far! The grammar is good and the updates being 2 per day is great. Not only that but the MC is absolutely overpowered considering he's the strongest in terms of power (not experience at the time I'm writing this). Since there are only 10 chapters, I don't expect there to be much world background currently, so no five stars. Same excuse for character design. But as the story grows, and the chapters becoming more plentiful, I'm sure this would change. Keep up the great work, author! And I hope you continue to keep pumping out more!

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The_Procrastinator
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Thank you for the review! ^_^

PagE_PickEr
PagE_PickErLv11

My pleasure! :D

The_Procrastinator:Thank you for the review! ^_^
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