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2025-01-07 22:54

I really like this romance novel at first i was a really skeptical with the first part but after reading for a bit i only have one problem too little chapters

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FantasiaLia09
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment! I appreciate your feedback. Could you elaborate on your thoughts about the 'little chapters'? Are you referring to the total of 19 chapters, or do you feel that the length of each chapter isn’t sufficient? Your insights would really help me improve the story!

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THIS IS HIGHLY RECOMMENDED!!! I'm not really a romance enthusiast but I gave this one a try and I'm currently at chapter 5 so my review contains spoilers from chapter 1-5. The main character, ovelia face hardships since the beginning. I would honestly like if we gave her non biological family a more screen time before we jumped on ovelia being sacrificed on chapter 1 as for us readers to develop our disdain and hatred to her family that mistreats her and also to characterized them well early on because I think we'll come back or they'll be introduced again later in the future, I think the first chapter is kinda fast paced but overall it's really great, her sister switched up is not something I expected but I still don't understand her intentions on befriending her in the beginning just to tease her in the end (maybe she acts like that because she's in front of her parents but she honestly care about ovelia? I don't know? I hope it's not as simple as she's just befriending her so that when it's the time she'll be used as sacrifice, she can insult her. This doesn't make sense to me. I hope she really cares about ovelia but just putting an act Infront of her parents) Also in the first chapter we can see ace human side and instantly wants to cherish ovelia like love at first sight but their first night instantly turns into horror as ace was consumed by his wolf side giving into his desires and losing common sense. I don't like the repetitive self explanation of ovelia with her fears, tho I want an explanation I also think it's too repetitive. Like "jolt down her spine" and "chills down my spine" something like that but it doesn't hurt the story imo. As ovelia wakes up we learned that when anna barge into her room and open her curtains showing the sunlight. I'm curious if the werewolves were afraid of sunlight just like the other movies I watched? hmmm. Also anna being marked? who marked her? I wanna know.. and marked while still being a maid? who owned her? who marked her? I need answers 🥹. Anna is such a sweet heart, I think it's instinctual that Ovelia felt something similarly on anna. Maybe anna is also been abused back at her home before she was sent there to werewolves palace? hmmmmm. Also ovelia, I don't known if I call her dumb/stupid or courages and brave, but her bravery of still keep preparing ace a snacks is admirable even tho we know she knows she stumbled when accidentally spill the coffee to the paper. She still prepare again and it comes to fruition UNFORTUNATELY, I smell something like a love triangle? Hmmm. Ray, bro stay away from them. I don't think this will end well, hmmm. I love your work 🙏🥰. Keep it up

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