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2025-01-05 18:13

This story was one of the most fun i've read in a long time. I liked how he's an actual hero that's op and yet has too many fatal flaws, one being selflessness, another being love, and another his humanity. It's amazing because I was like damn, he's in pain and there was even more pain but it was all worth it. We saw him as untouchable and you broke him, as an author should. I can't wait to see his development. You ended on quite a cliffhanger. The updates are great. The world is growing. You write pretty well and you seem to know a lot about the world. It shows in your work. Please just don't make him a shirou emiya or a peter parker. I hope that when you finish this story, however long that may be, that he is happy. Though, if that isn't your intention then forget about what I just said. This is an amazing story and I can't wait for more from you. P.s. The mom shit after arty was a stroke of evil genius. You destroyed his invincibility. Can't wait to see what he'll do now and good luck.

Percy Jackson - Beyond the Gods

AdamKadmon
4.8
120 Chs

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aceZ0
aceZ0Lv4

I dont get why this fic has such a high rating, its just a word for word retelling of the original books with just a few mentions of mc thrown in every other sentence. It follows every other trope pjo fics has, murdered dead mother, op powers but not even using it. Dialogue also feels stiff and artificial at times although no grammar or spelling mistakes ive seen.

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reinstate
reinstateLv15

The story is one of the better Percy Jackson fanfics. However, I don't like how there isn't any growth with other characters. Having the mc doing all the fighting gets old real quick.

2mth
SushiKat
SushiKatLv5

Keep up the good work. I love it not many Percy Jackson fanfiction and I hope you continue!!!

2mth
AdamKadmon
AdamKadmonAuthor

Author here, I'm posting this book on Wattpad too, my language is not English, I'm Brazilian. I hope you like it, vote and comment, please. Don't forget that!

3mth
NineHeavensZenith
NineHeavensZenithLv1

An incredible experience! This story kept me hooked from beginning to end. The plot is engaging, the characters are memorable, and the writing is simply impeccable. The author managed to create a rich and detailed world, making me feel like I was experiencing every moment with the characters. I highly recommend it to anyone looking for an exciting and unforgettable read. Highlights: * Plot: Original and addictive. * Characters: Complex and well-developed. * Style: Fluid and engaging. * World: Rich and well-constructed.

2mth
The_Paragon_White
The_Paragon_WhiteLv4

Although it has some mistakes and is a so-so translation, this story is very good! There is a feeling in the characters that makes us feel immersive. I loved it!

3mth
Celebron
CelebronLv1

Reveal spoiler

2mth
Mr_ZeroDagger07
Mr_ZeroDagger07Lv4

author can you please add overpowered mc tag as i tend to avoid story like that

2mth
Kyatus
KyatusLv15

This story is pretty interesting and the main character is cool. But I just don’t like how much stronger he is than everyone else. By chapter 25 the author says that he destroy the gods with a slap of his hand. That just really gets rid of any intrigue and tension with the story as you know that the MC is just so far above it all. I just wish that the mic developed slower. A good example of power progression in the Percy Jackson universe would be the Prince of the Underworld story by shadowmonarch he also has a character stronger than the others in the story but it feels believable and his goal makes it fine.

2mth
Celebron
CelebronLv1

Não cheguei ler ainda, então depois volto para dar uma avaliação, mais quem será o par romântico? 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

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