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Ahri_Gumiho
Ahri_GumihoLv155d
2025-01-01 15:31

MHA Sand-Sand Fruit UPDATE: Originally gave 3 stars due to 1) Author not keeping track of their own previous statements. 2) Author taking the hardest possible route for MC to do anything 3) writing and grammar are surprisingly cohesive and legible. Nothing out of place. Very shocking considering the previous 2 points made me think it was a Chinese translation. Review is now updated to 1 star due to author not liking my previous review and deleting it. I will be re-posting the review every time he does this with amount of deletes and dates. 1st repost January 1, 2025

Mha: Sand Sand Fruit

ZetharQuinn
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56 Chs

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ZetharQuinn
ZetharQuinnAuthor

Wait I didn't delete your review I never do that stuff I don't even have time for it I'm not like defending or giving excuses, I just don't do it... Still, I'm Sorry if you think It's My Fault And Thanks For The Review I'll just try to improve myself from here on (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠) p.s. Happy New Year

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Ahri_Gumiho
Ahri_GumihoLv15

Sorry then, but the originally review has disappeared. I didn’t even notice it myself until someone replied to my review asking a question, and I tried to open it to see the entire message and it couldn’t because the review was gone. So I assumed you deleted it.

ZetharQuinn:Wait I didn't delete your review I never do that stuff I don't even have time for it I'm not like defending or giving excuses, I just don't do it... Still, I'm Sorry if you think It's My Fault And Thanks For The Review I'll just try to improve myself from here on (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠) p.s. Happy New Year
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DragonkingKyo
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if you look you can see that other people then the author can report your review it is the three dots so maybe someone on here really doesn't like you and are very petty.

Ahri_Gumiho:Sorry then, but the originally review has disappeared. I didn’t even notice it myself until someone replied to my review asking a question, and I tried to open it to see the entire message and it couldn’t because the review was gone. So I assumed you deleted it.
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The entire fic is mediocre at best it fall under the same points of a author needlessly nerfing the protagonist for no reason which makes all the fights feel incredibly boring and frustrating and the grammer and writing quality is mediocre at best the author mixes up people in conversation quite a bit and all the dialouge feels robotic and one dimensional

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Zekril
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It's just that the MC is a freaking too much idiot. He might be a kid, but he is a reincarnated person, so he should not be so naive. Just hayz

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ErickHenrique_BR
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I can't stand reading all the time, I'm like, are you stupid? MC does things in the stupidest way possible, everything that is simple becomes difficult and I keep asking myself, why can someone reincarnated, who watches anime, who knows that the sand fruit exists, fight or do things this way? so ridiculous.

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earth_19998
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hey there i have been reading your fanfic and it has such a good story so i would like to know if you are interested in publishing this fanfic to my novel group and worry not we will pay you 4 to 5 dollars per thousand views and your can bring more views from other platforms and the more views your novel chapters have the more money you have so if you are interested please contact me on instagram or on discord My Instagram ID is yurichi_adrenaline and My discord Username is earth_19998   so please consider my offer one time and maybe this collaboration will change your whole life thank you

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a promissing story that was ruined by author's incompetence. shallow characters, no descriptions of their appearances at all. think of the dumbest reason something in the story is happening, and that's the motive

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