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Ahri_Gumiho
Ahri_GumihoLv156mth
2025-01-01 15:31

MHA Sand-Sand Fruit UPDATE: Originally gave 3 stars due to 1) Author not keeping track of their own previous statements. 2) Author taking the hardest possible route for MC to do anything 3) writing and grammar are surprisingly cohesive and legible. Nothing out of place. Very shocking considering the previous 2 points made me think it was a Chinese translation. Review is now updated to 1 star due to author not liking my previous review and deleting it. I will be re-posting the review every time he does this with amount of deletes and dates. 1st repost January 1, 2025

MHA: Sand Sand Fruit

ZetharQuinn
2.5
111 Chs

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ZetharQuinn
ZetharQuinnAuthor

Wait I didn't delete your review I never do that stuff I don't even have time for it I'm not like defending or giving excuses, I just don't do it... Still, I'm Sorry if you think It's My Fault And Thanks For The Review I'll just try to improve myself from here on (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠) p.s. Happy New Year

6mth
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Ahri_Gumiho
Ahri_GumihoLv15

Sorry then, but the originally review has disappeared. I didn’t even notice it myself until someone replied to my review asking a question, and I tried to open it to see the entire message and it couldn’t because the review was gone. So I assumed you deleted it.

ZetharQuinn:Wait I didn't delete your review I never do that stuff I don't even have time for it I'm not like defending or giving excuses, I just don't do it... Still, I'm Sorry if you think It's My Fault And Thanks For The Review I'll just try to improve myself from here on (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠) p.s. Happy New Year
6mth
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DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

if you look you can see that other people then the author can report your review it is the three dots so maybe someone on here really doesn't like you and are very petty.

Ahri_Gumiho:Sorry then, but the originally review has disappeared. I didn’t even notice it myself until someone replied to my review asking a question, and I tried to open it to see the entire message and it couldn’t because the review was gone. So I assumed you deleted it.
6mth
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Ahri_Gumiho
Ahri_GumihoLv15

Ah, that may be the case? But the original review was higher rated than this one, so I’m not sure why this one would remain up.

DragonkingKyo:if you look you can see that other people then the author can report your review it is the three dots so maybe someone on here really doesn't like you and are very petty.
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

gracias por avisar

6mth
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Mr_Light1
Mr_Light1Lv1

Bro delete the review, you are dramatically lowering the story, at least raise the stars or something

6mth
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Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv12

no

Mr_Light1:Bro delete the review, you are dramatically lowering the story, at least raise the stars or something
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1_Am_A_New_God
1_Am_A_New_GodLv4

No

Mr_Light1:Bro delete the review, you are dramatically lowering the story, at least raise the stars or something
5mth
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orangegummy
orangegummyLv14

he not even elementalize not use haki and fight againt weakling he made it look like a fight againt 4 emperor when with his physic and logia can solo the whole mha verse.... like trash cn that want to milk chapter and nerf mc to ground like a maso retard 🤡🤢💩 a logia that can get hit by normal punch and let weak enemy run away just to comeback for revenge..... mc are trash retard pushover loser

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This is a Chinese fanfiction, is it not? The past twenty chapters have pinyin words in them. I don't know where this story is going. The author appears to be trying to hide the MC's true power, but at the same time, constantly puts him in the spotlight. His usage of his Sand Quirk should've also made it obvious that he's involved in a lot of things, but the author made the side characters oblivious to that fact. There are also a few chapters that are duplicates (probably drafts) and/or have duplicated dialogues in them.

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