I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.

The story makes no sense, first of all why the f is the mc so horny to get / steal tonys money and arc in the early chaps if and i mean if u have Rimurus Whole Abilitys. This seems bland and dumb. if u have nothig to read then this is the shit

Pure stupidity by furry femboi mc/author...first despite having great sage he wants some fkin stupid armour of tony knowing how strong rimuru gets in future making armour even greater what tony can imagine would be a child's play for mc but nah this mf author wants to make mc a femboi and a ret@rd...

Looks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then

Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage

MC lands in marvel right next to tony in the desert after escaping capture. MC immediately thinks of killing tony and taking the arc reactor for no reason other think hes an idoit.... whats he gonna do its not even the upgraded arc reactor. Is he gonna build a suit. power a vacum. MORON!!

story starts right Tony's cave in Afghanistan now major cons of this novel is -character is too stupid , his first thought after seeing tony is to kill him and steal arc reactor, and his character doesnt really develop better. -story's translation is weak all chinesium element are not removed like, mc being part Chinese, their weird nick names for marvel characters , and weird morals also we shouldnt forget subtle racism, sexism and sometimes blatant. and also their monologues abt some well established plot points and philosophy + justification of mc actions like why he did that, then adding some chinese saying etc... -MAJOR LETDOWN: was stories premise is that mc hold one of the overpowered and most versatile ability in all fiction, with ability to calculation ,learning, understanding pretty much super ability but this story starts with this idiot thinking of killing tony to get premature arc reactor. and i don't spoil anyone but his decisions and character doesn't really change much - above are not even abt plot ,pace or writing quality so this point is for that : they are ok but pace is worse ,story usual web novel type

Bad mc, dumb and soulless.

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The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.