I wanted to read Hinata getting good at receives and serves, before the start of inter-high school, maybe even mastering the Boom jump, but you increased Hinata's height to 6'2'' from 5'3'', it is an interesting concept of Hinata not being limited by his height but you now have to factor somethings: increased weight affecting his jumping prowess, increased hitting/spiking power, the burden of jumping on his legs increased do to increased weight (like taiga from Kuroko no Basket), etc. P.S. I would like to read a Tanaka Ryunosuke fanfic where MC is reincarnated and starts to train with the same intensity and love as Kageyama Tobio towards volleyball. (You know practicing jump serves, receives, and different spikes (self-time difference, flexible wrist, straight, cut shots), etc.) and not just be a budget Bokuto. so if anyone knows of such a fic please recommend.
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This was something I was going to address in the future, I don't know if you noticed but he hasn't played very long games yet where I force him to the maximum, when he crosses that line, that would be addressed.
it's fine bro just don't drop tge fic like your other fics I actually wanna see tge end of this fic I am supporting you
