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Dreadnacht
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2024-12-18 07:09

A great start to the story so far, not much to truly go on but it’s got great potential without any notable problems. If you like football manager stories than this is probably for you as it is one of the better starts I’ve read on webnovel. Grammar, spelling, setting and characters are all above average for webnovel quality so far. Recommend checking it out, and I hope the author continues to upload consistently, a suggestion may be to cut the chapters into smaller parts and post daily, as scheduled chapters helps a lot with attracting and keeping readers. Overall a promising start to a story that has me wanting to read more, hope you keep it up author

Football: I am the coach of Atlético de Madrid.

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really like the story can we get more than 1 chapter a week

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i love it, it's word count is around 11-12 thousand per chapter, and the writing/ translation has improved overall a good read and unique since it doesn't start in the prem

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I liked that you started in LaLiga rather than the prem, overall a good story. only thing I would complain about is the update time, I need more chapters.

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