In general, another excellent translation from this author, there is nothing Chinese at all. The story is good and has an interesting perspective. The only thing is that in all the author’s works the characters are rather anti-heroes in nature and in the stories there are many moments with dubious morality. I would like something more positive :)

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Pretty good story. Here are some important things to watch out before reading this fanfic: Pro: 1. Scientific themed story that actually focused on genetics and stuff. 2. Prodigy and Strong MC(Not 6 years old hokage type of strong, but just generally stronger than people twice his age. I mean it's Orochimaru so it's not really surprising XD). 3. Focused on the gain and development of personal power with a little bit of world background development later on. (i.e. : MC developing his own secret lair and faction). 4. Pretty scarce Chinese poison considering this is a translation (pretty good translation quality). Cons: 1. Slow burn romance although knowing our MC age that's pretty reasonable I guess.... (for many people this is good, for some who sucker for romance like me not really that much lol) 2. AU (Alternate Universe). The reason why I call this fic AU is because sometimes I have a hard time to measure in which time the story takes place. At the end of the day just make sure that you keep in mind that this fic may contain some AU element and you are gucci. 3. Moderate amount of time skip through the middle of the story. (for those who love detail it might be a little bit annoying but personally I do think that It's pretty justified. Most of the time the time skips there just to make sure we can read the interesting part of the story rather than 50+ chapters about MC rambling about science lol. Although, there's some important plot point that we can spare some little bit detail but again, I have no big problem with this part). Overall, It's a pretty interesting story to read if you want MC that explores genetic and science related subjects in the Naruto world.

A good story with a reincarnate orochimaru with a scientific system (serum + weapon + gene ect) an original story with a lot of good thing and the mc is not an average chinese mc who only think about women and s*x

I'm writing this review as of chapter 241. Grammar: the translator is doing an excellent job translating this fanfic, so far there are very few mistakes that I could find throughout this story and the editing is also excellent. Plot: the plot is good with no glaring plot holes. The flow is also nice and there were no arcs where I found myself bored and skipping chapters. The MC's system is also simple to understand and doesn't have one of those system consciousness that always speak and annoys, though from chapter 140 there were no more mentions of system missions and technology points so it seems like the system faded to the background somewhat. The MC's personality: this here is one of the glaring downsides of this fanfic. Till chapter 150 the MC's personality is as if he's a machine with no emotions whatsoever, even with Tsunade pursuing him relentlessly since they were children he never responses to anything and just acts coldly towards her and everyone else. Then from chapter 150 to 200 it somewhat improved and there were mentions of him have having some "feelings" here and there as he responded to Tsunade's advances and caring for her brother and some other people, but that too isn't much. To sum it all up, I will give this fanfic a 4-star review only because of the MC's personality.

very well translated without weird naming error, translator put some efforts on this recommended, the story itself is decent pacing with refreshing scenario to naruto fanfic, the author didn't afraid to change plot trajectory of canon naruto. simply put very interesting

Adding weapon in the war of naruto are a fucking good idea

This is really good, it doesn’t feel like a Chinese translation at all, the beginning, felt oddly similar to a orochimaru as MC book that I’ve read about with a similar system however, I found out after a few amount of chapters that this is a different novel. I almost missed this gem, it’s really great. The pacing is perfect and no 8 year old kage level mc with mangekyou.

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honestly this is one of the Chinese fanfics that doesn't make me wanna take a 12 gauge and empty my brains out. development is great however there might be a harem in the later stages of the story (around chap 200). The translator did take out most of the inherent arrogance the side characters have and give them somewhat? of a personality. 4.8/5