Good first few chapters and i hope you dont drop this novel its already a good premise. We need more date a live fanfics and i hope you consider my world recommendations since their is not much fanfic about those world. I also hope he gets all the spirit girls all from the Kabbalah tree, Mio, Rinne, Mayuri, Ren, Rio and every girl in the Neighboring World

I thought it was interesting but I dropped it in chapter 13, it's a copy-paste of the original series, how boring (google translator) .......

just like the other guy said, even though this fic is interesting it's just a copy from the original story. also the mc is delulu pro max. he might be not beta but he's dumb af.

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I've been waiting for the day when someone will finish the fanfiction on "date a live" for a long time, so I don't want to give a fair 1-star rating. There is a lot of unnecessary text describing things, a scanty amount of dialogues and character interactions, the protagonist is so empty that you want to put the original character back in his place, there is no depth at all in the story. To be honest, there is a feeling that this is written using a neural network. But this is the impression of the first 8 chapters, I just hope the author will grow above himself and put at least a little more effort into his story.

5 Star ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Since it's Rare To have DAL novel this day's . and Please Dont Drop it !!

I don't write reviews but I wanted to say since this is one of the only Date a live and the only one to have Shido as the mc. I approve just hope this shido doesn't get rejected by Reine as a parting gift I made it better

It's one of the best Date A Live fanfic I've ever read . Good job keep writing. If possible release more chapters daily .

Like 2 other comments here, copy from copy from copy lol... Seriously the author didn't want to change anything, even the interactions of ecchi animes have, really sad, what changes is the real name of the protagonist and the abilities he gains, I didn't like the system at all, what made me give up on this fanfic is the lack of charisma that this protagonist has, it's like rice with egg, only they forgot to put salt in the rice and beans lol... horrible, the author is good at writing, I saw few grammar mistakes, he was able to describe the characters, world and story development well without comments, right copy from copy... Note, you can only read up to chapter 11. you want to know a charismatic protagonist try reading villain the play of destiny (excellent fanfic)

At first it is copy like the other guy said. but just a few chapters is copy like 13 or before and later chapters are what we want it not same or copy so everyone can read at ease. After that is all good and hoped it will continue updated.