it started good but author decided to mix anime worlds and change mikan and rito relationship, it could be a good To Love Ru Fanfic but its ruined now, meh

Looks solid, the grammar is quite good and though there are only 5 chapters I like the way its put together. Keep up the good work author. [img=update]

well, this has the start of a good series as long as it doesn't get dropped midway. so, I hope you keep up the good work. the writing and the plot have a good starting point and I don't see any grammar errors so that's a bonus in my book. as long as the updates are stable you'll have my power stones permanently.

I don't know if this will replace my last review but here goes: 1: don't care about the negative reviews or comments, those people weren't going to read the book anyway so their opinion doesn't matter. 2: the plot is good and it's a fan-fiction so take all the creative liberties you want. just make not to lose the plot in the process. 3: your grammar is solid and you have a great start just keep up the good work. 4: as long as the story doesn't get dropped midway through and the updates come in on a regular basis you'll have my daily power stones. 5: NEGATIVE PEOPLE, REVIEWS AND COMMENTS DO NOT MATTER. WRITE HOW YOU WANT TO WRITE AND IGNORE THE REST. 6: HAPPY WRITING AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.