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Heiji
HeijiLv24mth
2024-12-19 01:56

Pardon. Am just a critic. Am be honest on this one. This is my second review on this seven novel and am just 😩 I would yell "THE UPDATING SCHEDULE SUCKS!" For real, for real. I hope you fix that soon or else, am gonna drop reading this. KEEP WRITING!

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ciae_re
ciae_reAuthor

huhu i'm sorry ;P bear with me for a while, and to make up for it, i will mass release the chapters sooon °^°

Heiji
HeijiLv2

It's been 4 days. Just a reminder.

ciae_re:huhu i'm sorry ;P bear with me for a while, and to make up for it, i will mass release the chapters sooon °^°
ciae_re
ciae_reAuthor

waitttt, ginme a little more time

Heiji:It's been 4 days. Just a reminder.
Thy_lin
Thy_linLv2

Writing is hard especially when you are reviewing already made chapters , let her take her time rather than reducing quality for quantity as it will be unreasonable to stop reading because of her for now hefty schedule at least that's what I think as a fellow writer 👣

Heiji:It's been 4 days. Just a reminder.
ObservantReader
ObservantReaderLv4

Umu Umu, I agree with Thy_lin. Writing is already hard as is but is even harder when someone rushes you to finish faster or do better, placing a heavy burden on your shoulders. and even when you managed to reach their first expectation, the quality of your work will drop immensely and they would be left unsatisfied anyway. Because when there's a deadlines ahead, all you can think about is how to reach it as fast as possible which blinds you to everything else... its like your walking down a narrow tunnel where the expectations of the readers ia the walls caging you and that wall is crumbling fast with all you can do is try to reach the exit as soon as possible and not get stuck in the rubble.... ...but when you get inevitably buried by that expectation, everyone loses. Most readers understands this and never try to hasten the author or give them a heavy expectation. but there's always a minority who were devoured by their impatience. I'm not a writer but i've had some experience with expectations and deadline (plus I have quite a diverse imagination lol) and that feeling of burden like the stars themselves want to weigh me down just makes me want to stop trying... stop doing anything all together and escape to the depths of the shell that is my mind, be free from any burden... but life goes on and your forced to go with it.... so author (if your reading this), you can forget the expectations from us readers and just do what you find enjoyable, the true ones will follow you while others will follow someone else 😁 anyways, thank you for reading my rant and I hope you have a good life (why does that sound like a threat O_o).....

Thy_lin:Writing is hard especially when you are reviewing already made chapters , let her take her time rather than reducing quality for quantity as it will be unreasonable to stop reading because of her for now hefty schedule at least that's what I think as a fellow writer 👣
ObservantReader
ObservantReaderLv4

goddamn, seeing my own comment just made me realize how much I had ranted 🫠

ObservantReader:Umu Umu, I agree with Thy_lin. Writing is already hard as is but is even harder when someone rushes you to finish faster or do better, placing a heavy burden on your shoulders. and even when you managed to reach their first expectation, the quality of your work will drop immensely and they would be left unsatisfied anyway. Because when there's a deadlines ahead, all you can think about is how to reach it as fast as possible which blinds you to everything else... its like your walking down a narrow tunnel where the expectations of the readers ia the walls caging you and that wall is crumbling fast with all you can do is try to reach the exit as soon as possible and not get stuck in the rubble.... ...but when you get inevitably buried by that expectation, everyone loses. Most readers understands this and never try to hasten the author or give them a heavy expectation. but there's always a minority who were devoured by their impatience. I'm not a writer but i've had some experience with expectations and deadline (plus I have quite a diverse imagination lol) and that feeling of burden like the stars themselves want to weigh me down just makes me want to stop trying... stop doing anything all together and escape to the depths of the shell that is my mind, be free from any burden... but life goes on and your forced to go with it.... so author (if your reading this), you can forget the expectations from us readers and just do what you find enjoyable, the true ones will follow you while others will follow someone else 😁 anyways, thank you for reading my rant and I hope you have a good life (why does that sound like a threat O_o).....
ciae_re
ciae_reAuthor

slr me just saw this after checking reviews TT thanksssss huhu and btw i saw your comment saying "everything below here is a repeat" hahwhaha i apologize, i forgot to erase the draft from the revised version and published the chapter and only noticed it when i did a proofread 😭 (please bear with this newbie, won't happen again TT)

ObservantReader:Umu Umu, I agree with Thy_lin. Writing is already hard as is but is even harder when someone rushes you to finish faster or do better, placing a heavy burden on your shoulders. and even when you managed to reach their first expectation, the quality of your work will drop immensely and they would be left unsatisfied anyway. Because when there's a deadlines ahead, all you can think about is how to reach it as fast as possible which blinds you to everything else... its like your walking down a narrow tunnel where the expectations of the readers ia the walls caging you and that wall is crumbling fast with all you can do is try to reach the exit as soon as possible and not get stuck in the rubble.... ...but when you get inevitably buried by that expectation, everyone loses. Most readers understands this and never try to hasten the author or give them a heavy expectation. but there's always a minority who were devoured by their impatience. I'm not a writer but i've had some experience with expectations and deadline (plus I have quite a diverse imagination lol) and that feeling of burden like the stars themselves want to weigh me down just makes me want to stop trying... stop doing anything all together and escape to the depths of the shell that is my mind, be free from any burden... but life goes on and your forced to go with it.... so author (if your reading this), you can forget the expectations from us readers and just do what you find enjoyable, the true ones will follow you while others will follow someone else 😁 anyways, thank you for reading my rant and I hope you have a good life (why does that sound like a threat O_o).....
ciae_re
ciae_reAuthor

Umu Umu me loves long comments as me learns a lot of lessons from them, especially this one ;> as of now, i'm writing the story based on how i truly imagine it and not tailoring it for readers (though they may feel disappointed 'bout it) but it's okay as i am writing this here because i want to tell a story, not to satisfy others ;> thanks for the advice, me will follow it hehehe ;> have a good day !!

ObservantReader:goddamn, seeing my own comment just made me realize how much I had ranted 🫠
ObservantReader
ObservantReaderLv4

lol, no worries. we all make mistakes, I don't mind reminding you if i come across any mistakes that you missed. besides, all mistakes can help you learn to be a better writer, so its just a different way of learning. you've already done a good work, everything else is just you improving

ciae_re:slr me just saw this after checking reviews TT thanksssss huhu and btw i saw your comment saying "everything below here is a repeat" hahwhaha i apologize, i forgot to erase the draft from the revised version and published the chapter and only noticed it when i did a proofread 😭 (please bear with this newbie, won't happen again TT)
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