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Nimil_pardeshi
Nimil_pardeshiLv133mth
2024-12-24 20:32

this is a disappointing novel the mc is hell bent on hiding his powers from his family but has no problem showing it to the maid's and butlers he keeps everything secret from his family who are nothing but loving towards him this is just a waste of time i won't recommend it

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KangarooCruz
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I suggest you read more. He doesn’t hide his powers as if he’ll die if he didn’t. Everything will be revealed in due time. He doesn’t expose his all his secrets to his parents, but he also doesn't plan to hide it from them for too long. In the early chaps, he’s only five years old. Five. He only hides his company because he wants to build it himself for now. He’ll reveal it very soon.

Nimil_pardeshi
Nimil_pardeshiLv13

dude you are thinking in a modern point of view not a middle ages point of view he is 5 yes but maids and butlers already call him blessed by god and all i am saying is he doesn't have to keep it a secret from His family it's not like his parents are going to make it public or atleast give him a little paranoia that he wants to be enjoy the way his mother and dad treat him like a baby and he loves to have this childhood which he didn't get to have in his past life or something but the way you have wrote him he just don't want his parents to know about him just because and that is what the problem is give it a real reason not just saying that he doesn't want his parents to know because it fine enough in fanfics but this is a novel you have to get into the characters core that's what disappointing

KangarooCruz:I suggest you read more. He doesn’t hide his powers as if he’ll die if he didn’t. Everything will be revealed in due time. He doesn’t expose his all his secrets to his parents, but he also doesn't plan to hide it from them for too long. In the early chaps, he’s only five years old. Five. He only hides his company because he wants to build it himself for now. He’ll reveal it very soon.
KangarooCruz
KangarooCruzAuthor

I see…I understand what you say. I’ll try to do that, but SPOILER He’s about to reveal his true powers and his Reborn company to his parents, so we won’t have to argue anymore 😆 Truce? 🤝

Nimil_pardeshi:dude you are thinking in a modern point of view not a middle ages point of view he is 5 yes but maids and butlers already call him blessed by god and all i am saying is he doesn't have to keep it a secret from His family it's not like his parents are going to make it public or atleast give him a little paranoia that he wants to be enjoy the way his mother and dad treat him like a baby and he loves to have this childhood which he didn't get to have in his past life or something but the way you have wrote him he just don't want his parents to know about him just because and that is what the problem is give it a real reason not just saying that he doesn't want his parents to know because it fine enough in fanfics but this is a novel you have to get into the characters core that's what disappointing
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Nimil_pardeshi
Nimil_pardeshiLv13

😁😁

KangarooCruz:I see…I understand what you say. I’ll try to do that, but SPOILER He’s about to reveal his true powers and his Reborn company to his parents, so we won’t have to argue anymore 😆 Truce? 🤝
JMSnovel
JMSnovelLv4

Because you read only until 18th ch? It has good pace and they know it already incase you dropped

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Tuluz
TuluzLv15

I rarely write reviews but this whole story was a massive disappointment. Going into this I thought it would be really good due to the amount of 5 star reviews and the concept of the novel however I was quickly disappointed. There a three main issues that I have with this novel 1. The author has a weird grasp of economics, the way the currency was setup up had problems from the beginning however these could be overlooked until the author decided to start adding USD conversion at which point everything went downhill. For perspective the author claims that maids in the MCs family get paid a relatively high wage of 1 gold a month. However the author later says that 1,000 gold = $10,000 (1 gold = $10) meaning that the maids make less than 1/560 of the average monthly salary in the US. This could maybe make sense if the MC was in a third world country where labor costs were low however the MC is the son of the richest family in the world and obviously does not live in a poor area. I got past this point however and kept reading, however shortly after when the MC introduces chess it is priced at 100 bronze per set which would be $0.001 per set. You can buy ramen in most gas stations for $1 meaning 1 ramen noodles container = 1,000 chess sets. Make it make sense. Again this would maybe be fine if the author didn’t bring up the amount the MC made in USD repeatedly. 2. The MC tries to implement modern social practices that do not make sense in a medieval setting onto this world (e.g. The MC tries to force all the house staff to work a maximum of 8 hours per day and no more, great thought except it makes no sense in a medieval society where work hours are determined by sunrise and sunset) 3. Cringe / Cliche. Everything seems to always work out perfectly for the MC with little to no effort, MC follows reincarnator 101 on steroid template to make money using modern ideas but has an AI that does all the work and creates perfect blueprints. What really irked me though was the MC just straight up giving away the soap recipe to other people because he didn’t want to hurt their business and wanted everyone to live peacefully and happily. Verdict: Had and has potential, author should rewrite what they have an try again. Would not recommend reading until the author makes some edits and fixes some of the biggest issues specifically the currency.

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