this fic has been translated by bored_reader and has reached chapter 130. however it is currently hiatsu without notice. i will only compare whose is the most comfortable to read since this fic is a chinese mtl and you two are not the authors.

many grammatical mistakes , translation not so good,but it is readable

this is already being translated by someone else and it has more chapters

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It was a healthy touch, different from others I had read. Finally a story that begins and ends, even if a little rushed towards the end.............................................

It's a fanfiction but the story takes exactly the same turn as the original novel - whether the interactions or the development of the events are almost the same. the character certainly has the knowledge of the novel but in the end he has the same interactions and the same errors. One thing to know is that it is very confusing at the level of the names of the cultivation grades as well as those of Long Kui and Hong Kui. There is also a problem at the level of objects obtained by the system which directly assumes that you know what it is talking about but it is always possible to understand their function by reading. My opinion on fanfiction is that it is good for passing the time but in no way exciting, inspiring or even unexpected. I repeat, it's exactly the same scenario (I'm in chapter 67)

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ngl im confused as to why this is the most popular BTTF fic in the category when the translation is so horrible. story wise its decent but the translation is so bad that it outweighs the pros of the novel.