This story has alot of potential to be great but it's too disorganised and makes no sense. One moment the story is heading in a direction then then the other its heading into a completely different story. Stuff that seem important and Critical gets forgotten about after a couple chapter and something new comes to replace for it to be forgotten again. The MC is too emotional and makes no sense, he can defeat a top general of Grindelwald but is struggling against muggles, everything feels forced, doesn't flow naturally and makes no sense. It has potential but it needs to be rewritten with a clear story in mind not chaos

Sorry but i just cant handle the start of the book it just didnt hook me into it, i think mainly because of the background chosen. Still its pretty good overall and i recomend it if you dont have anything else to read and i mean it

Absolutely amazing story I highly recommend. it's set during Tom riddle / Voldermorts day at school but has a huge world outside of hogwarts which it explore very well and the main character isnt super overpowered and the powerr progression is exceptional well done give him both weakness and strengths. On top of multiple chapters everyday making it one of my top current reads.

good stuff tbh...............................................................................................................................................................................................

it is good but disorganized , the story gives me heart ache especially the death of algaia

Sin romance? Sin harem? Solo un tipo al azar que ahora es compañero de clase de tom riddle? Por alguna razón no puedo encontrar entusiasmo por leer la historia, si alguien quiere, puede hacerme un poco de spoiler, y decirme si la historia es interesante, y si hay romance o comedia, mis géneros favoritos.

My biggest issue with this is that the main character has the same maturity, oftentimes less, than his 11 year old peers, despite having an 'adult soul'. Additionally, the main character continually waxes on about how he has an Eastern background and is thus above such things as conflict. The main character needs work.

if I'm not wrong this is a translation, one made with machine. But I have to say, I love the story, and kodoes too the original author. And now this is one of my new favorites. thank you

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