My brutally honest review Firstly overused reincarnation plot Secondly mc has almost the same personality as others writing similar novels Thirdly could have done way better with the promise given from the synopsis & mame of the novel Lastly It's actually not a bad novel so don't get chased away by my brutally honest review if I wasn't purposely looking for faults I prolly would have given it a 4.5 and above rating
Liked it!
LIKEI appreciate you review. but let me address the points u raised. 1. overused reincarnation plot, see the from the synopsis and even title you already know reincarnation or transmigration is going to happen. I don't see any point in using an unique way for reincarnation, because it doesn't really matter story is after the reincarnation event and how the reincarnation takes place is least of a concern for any reader ig. 2. so basically you found Mc's personality to be a cliché, well i don't know, u may have read more novels than me, but see i tried to make Mc as based and realistic as i could. even the first chapter of novel is focused on exploring mc's views and establishing his chatacter which remain constant till the latest updated chapter [5]. 3. Ig i could have but i write story with plot build up approach where i set everything up create a atmosphere and then delivery a pay off, unlike for example fated villain, which already start on high note. like protagonist is in marriage talks and where he is first faced with chosen ones (this already deliver story's essence) but mine start slowly from a room where mc as chance to prepare. to summarise it i think it's too early to judge it's still on building phase and will need couple chapters more to get to on pay offs. but i really appreciate your review and i liked it a lot that u kept it real and in the end whatever i say it won't matter if story is boring, right? intriguing way of reincarnation, unique plot and stuffs are supposed to be add ons a great story has but in essence it have to be enjoyable atleast. so i will do my best to make it enjoyabls and delivery it in best way possible. thanks for reading!
Harem or no harem?? Hope it's single Female lead
YourAverage_Reader:I appreciate you review. but let me address the points u raised. 1. overused reincarnation plot, see the from the synopsis and even title you already know reincarnation or transmigration is going to happen. I don't see any point in using an unique way for reincarnation, because it doesn't really matter story is after the reincarnation event and how the reincarnation takes place is least of a concern for any reader ig. 2. so basically you found Mc's personality to be a cliché, well i don't know, u may have read more novels than me, but see i tried to make Mc as based and realistic as i could. even the first chapter of novel is focused on exploring mc's views and establishing his chatacter which remain constant till the latest updated chapter [5]. 3. Ig i could have but i write story with plot build up approach where i set everything up create a atmosphere and then delivery a pay off, unlike for example fated villain, which already start on high note. like protagonist is in marriage talks and where he is first faced with chosen ones (this already deliver story's essence) but mine start slowly from a room where mc as chance to prepare. to summarise it i think it's too early to judge it's still on building phase and will need couple chapters more to get to on pay offs. but i really appreciate your review and i liked it a lot that u kept it real and in the end whatever i say it won't matter if story is boring, right? intriguing way of reincarnation, unique plot and stuffs are supposed to be add ons a great story has but in essence it have to be enjoyable atleast. so i will do my best to make it enjoyabls and delivery it in best way possible. thanks for reading!
is it gonna be single FL or more than one girl for Mc ?
YourAverage_Reader:I appreciate you review. but let me address the points u raised. 1. overused reincarnation plot, see the from the synopsis and even title you already know reincarnation or transmigration is going to happen. I don't see any point in using an unique way for reincarnation, because it doesn't really matter story is after the reincarnation event and how the reincarnation takes place is least of a concern for any reader ig. 2. so basically you found Mc's personality to be a cliché, well i don't know, u may have read more novels than me, but see i tried to make Mc as based and realistic as i could. even the first chapter of novel is focused on exploring mc's views and establishing his chatacter which remain constant till the latest updated chapter [5]. 3. Ig i could have but i write story with plot build up approach where i set everything up create a atmosphere and then delivery a pay off, unlike for example fated villain, which already start on high note. like protagonist is in marriage talks and where he is first faced with chosen ones (this already deliver story's essence) but mine start slowly from a room where mc as chance to prepare. to summarise it i think it's too early to judge it's still on building phase and will need couple chapters more to get to on pay offs. but i really appreciate your review and i liked it a lot that u kept it real and in the end whatever i say it won't matter if story is boring, right? intriguing way of reincarnation, unique plot and stuffs are supposed to be add ons a great story has but in essence it have to be enjoyable atleast. so i will do my best to make it enjoyabls and delivery it in best way possible. thanks for reading!