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2024-12-22 08:07

There is BIG down side to this novel. OP stories must focus on character relationships. because every battle is won before they are even fought. So love, friendship, comedy romance, intruge, slice of life. All these things have to be there. There is 2 big problems that are in this novel that hamper that. One the system or core or whatever is sentient and is either friends or lover to the MC... not good that mean its going to be one of the most meaningful connection the mc has. 2nd World hopping..... because this not only puts a timer on any relationships but also reinforces that the system is that most important person as its the only one that will go with him most likely. This whole sentient system this is a shortcut for not having to write a whole character that would be either love interest or best friends to the MC in my opinion.

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