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the last novel was a lot better. In this one, I feel like the Mc is a side character. It's like he exists just so the other characters could talk to each other. He has no story and no character development, and every time the author introduces a new character, he makes them a lot stronger than the Mc, and all he does is say that the Mc has potential. he is another potential man.

The story is quite good, but I still prefer the old one

i still prefer the old one. i don't really like this version

pls dont drop the story..............................

My dear author, I will support you as usual. But be sure to make the black haired wizard (Zerf) and barefoot girl (Mavis) together again.

The starting chapters were a bit rough, to the point that they felt completely different from what I initially expected. It wasn’t bad, per se, but the MC came across as too much of a side character, lacking any standout traits or a unique personality imo. That said, it’s understandable for the MC to be overshadowed by others early on, given that he’s still weak and hasn’t gained any powers. Based on my observations, the archetype of the MC here is a neutral good type, with some semi traits of a Japanese light novel protagonist. So, don’t expect an MC who’s out to slaughter everything that offends him. Thankfully I've been seeing character development from him as of 30+ chapter and expect more to come. Also, much luv to ur other fic.

Como devo dizer ... seu protagonista não parece um protagonista sabe , ele é meio que um personagem secundario com o nome de protagonista, tire ele e não muda nada . Devo também dizer que o sistema de poder está muito desbalanceado , focado muito no jujutsu e diminuindo os outros tipos. Em geral a história até que é legalzinha mas fica muito clichê e sem sal.

Very good bro, continue your work, don't stop in the middle .................................. . .......... . ,. , , , , , , ,.,., ,.,..,. ,., ,..,., ,