appreciate the review , honestly, even I'm confused about how I'm writing this ... This should be my first work thats actually being uploaded so, I'd love to learn more and more and improve on.

There should atleast be a basic introduction of the system, it's functionality, the world, what different levels represent. It felt like I started reading a novel from somewhere is between instead of the beginning. However, the one thing that I liked most was that there was no useless mention of chat and the messages on it.

yeah, and honestly , if you continue on with the story ,you'd also find the trade function confusing and many other. it doesn't even make sense to me about the basic stuffs, I'll probably redo the whole story after I'm done writing the plots . it's crazy.

It'd be great if you could do that. This feels more like jotting down of abstract ideas at high level than a novel. I hope that the MC develops as a merchant, not just with respect to to system but the world as well.

Your idea does gives me a way to write around since I was writing with no direction, the talent ended up being useless in the further episodes that I wrote up.