I wasn't sure what to make of this at first but finished at chapter 10 as thus all that there was at the time so far it's pretty good I'm not keen that he's going to join the team but hopefully it's done right. It should be fine hopefully this story continues in a good way but if you want my opinion it's worth a read so far.

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Brother, you use the word calculate too much. We already know that everything he does is calculated, there is no need to repeat it in everything the MC does. But it's just a suggestion. I like your story.

Decent story, but the MC just trashes heroes for 6 chapters in the beginning. it gets better but leads to an almost apocalyptic level event. all his planning and superior talk, nothing but air. im not really sure what to think of the story overall right now. if he still acts like he's some superior badass genius it'll just sound funny now. I'll revise this if it gets better.

Great, the writing is perfect and detailed-though sometimes repetitive. The story developes at a slow steady pace, and the characters are well written. I personally like the story, its original and you actually execute the “Genius MC” thing pretty well.

Está bastante bien de momento lo único que me molesta un poco es como cada rato se dice que superior esto superior lo otro no sé si así es el personaje en lo comic pero molesta un poco ....seguiré leyendo sigue así