Writing quality is good, the dialogue is smooth and the mc is chill. The blushing thing is weird but might just be a translation error or a quirk

Really nice im just waiting for more chapters. And i hope author doesn't drop cuz most good twilight fanfics get dropped mid story soo u better not drop or

Bro so good hurry up and make more. Ready to see what’s up w dude already

A very good story, told slowly, building the characters without rushing in a balanced and pleasant way, I'm really surprised to find something so good with a Twilight theme. Congratulations to the Author and please keep writing, don't disappear, if you stop writing, please let me know.

This is a good story told very well.. The slow pace, the character building and the world building is immaculate. I love this. Very few twilight fanfics to go around. And this takes the jewel. With an original character, with some original folklores and these new but exciting relationships that seemed to match the canon so effortlessly. Very well done, ser author. TYFC.

Development is very interesting, slow and steady, as it should be. Even though readers know what he is becoming, the mystery surrounding it, which almost no one in the story knows, involves me a lot. Keep up the good work, I'll be following. (translator).

the story is quite nice, but the updating frequency does not quite match the novel's pace.

What a wonderful and amazing story. Best Twilight fic I have ever read and so nice the grammar is excellent as well compared to a lot on webnovel. The new character and perspectives I find add so much more to the story than the original. And I can not wait to see where the story goes. Please is there a P.atreon or smth to support and perhaps get a few more chapters? It is just I can not get enough! Thank you for the hard work!!!!!

Updates about every 2 days Good quality writing and besides misspelling Emmett’s name, there’s not much to say about the grammar The story’s pace is good and steady. Character personalities and interactions seem realistic for the world setting and doesn’t cause any confusion or wtf moments. World setting is Twilight so not much detail there since it’s already been established by the original book, except for the jabs at the school and crime in Phoenix, Arizona. All in all a great story. Hope it doesn’t fall to the curse of good Twilight fanfics. (The curse is that all the good Twilight Fanfics with potential for greatness are dropped suddenly with no warning at around chapter 40) I’ll be rooting for you, Author. Keep it up. Also, we need more chapters.

The characters are well developed.The storyline is epic and overall well written. The only thing lacking is the number of chapters other than that its a great read.