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2024-12-29 16:19

It is alright, but I really feel like story and character development and building feels a bit stale and lacking something. I truly see you did make a significant effort to improve your writing ability. But I suggest you explore more the world and environment around him, and add a bit context and background on the main character. But overall, I feel like that this is a good start for a story I am interested in reading about! [img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend]

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