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Gh0st00
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2024-11-28 00:09

just from the description alone you can tell this is a 💩 translation

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Night_FrOst_
Night_FrOst_Author

Don't judge a book by its cover. This is my first attempt at translating and editing, so I'm still learning as I go. I can see you're passionate about webnovels, and I appreciate your critique. However, please keep in mind that I can only translate and edit the original content; I cannot change the story itself. My focus is on sharing the original author's work with more readers, and while it might not be perfect, I hope it can still bring enjoyment to those who love fanfiction. This project is a labor of love, not a professional literary endeavor, and it's meant for entertainment and practice as I improve my skills. That being said, constructive feedback like yours helps me grow, and I’ll do my best to incorporate it into future projects. Thank you for taking the time to review it—it means a lot!

Fakeuser_17
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Bro can you tell from where you got the original novel form?

Night_FrOst_:Don't judge a book by its cover. This is my first attempt at translating and editing, so I'm still learning as I go. I can see you're passionate about webnovels, and I appreciate your critique. However, please keep in mind that I can only translate and edit the original content; I cannot change the story itself. My focus is on sharing the original author's work with more readers, and while it might not be perfect, I hope it can still bring enjoyment to those who love fanfiction. This project is a labor of love, not a professional literary endeavor, and it's meant for entertainment and practice as I improve my skills. That being said, constructive feedback like yours helps me grow, and I’ll do my best to incorporate it into future projects. Thank you for taking the time to review it—it means a lot!
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Night_FrOst_
Night_FrOst_Author

You can find it in the MTL version or read the raw; the name has already been mentioned in the synopsis. I will also mention it here: 火影:关于我兄弟是斑爷这档事.

Fakeuser_17:Bro can you tell from where you got the original novel form?
Evil_History
Evil_HistoryLv1

Вы не правы.

HooLeeFuk
HooLeeFukLv4

Who are the Female lead/leads?

Night_FrOst_:Don't judge a book by its cover. This is my first attempt at translating and editing, so I'm still learning as I go. I can see you're passionate about webnovels, and I appreciate your critique. However, please keep in mind that I can only translate and edit the original content; I cannot change the story itself. My focus is on sharing the original author's work with more readers, and while it might not be perfect, I hope it can still bring enjoyment to those who love fanfiction. This project is a labor of love, not a professional literary endeavor, and it's meant for entertainment and practice as I improve my skills. That being said, constructive feedback like yours helps me grow, and I’ll do my best to incorporate it into future projects. Thank you for taking the time to review it—it means a lot!
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Night_FrOst_
Night_FrOst_Author

Mito Uzumaki

HooLeeFuk:Who are the Female lead/leads?
Cultivator_Asura
Cultivator_AsuraLv1

If Mito is the FML, how will Tsunade be born?

Night_FrOst_:Mito Uzumaki
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David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4

Surcres
SurcresLv5

With magic

Cultivator_Asura:If Mito is the FML, how will Tsunade be born?
Oliviaz_Marsh
Oliviaz_MarshLv1

Oh, look, another braindead parasite who thinks their worthless opinion matters. If you had two functioning brain cells, you'd know that whining like an entitled child doesn't make you a critic—it just makes you a joke. If the translation ruins your 'reading experience' so much, go learn the language yourself instead of polluting the internet with your garbage takes. Or better yet, shut the fuck up and disappear.

Astrohook23
Astrohook23Lv14

Did that make you feel strong?

Oliviaz_Marsh:Oh, look, another braindead parasite who thinks their worthless opinion matters. If you had two functioning brain cells, you'd know that whining like an entitled child doesn't make you a critic—it just makes you a joke. If the translation ruins your 'reading experience' so much, go learn the language yourself instead of polluting the internet with your garbage takes. Or better yet, shut the fuck up and disappear.
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