The translation is good, but the story is extraordinarily fast-paced. One chapter he catches a pokemon, the next they are in a new city about to fight a gym. For me, pokemon fanfictions are more about the journey, where this gives me a feeling of speedrunning a game. MC wants the 3 starters of Kanto, catches them without any issue within like 5 chapters, MC needs to run an errand for someone, suddenly he is in the town he needs to be in. You don't see any training, bonding with pokemon, or a journey, which for me are the biggest things needed.

is a good fanfic but feels too generic. the writing is good but feel to monotone. Maybe my standard is a bit too high seeing i read so much pokemon fanfic. but for me it is basically a pokemon game with a bit of writing, the battles were too simple it might as well turn base game, there basically very few meaningful or engaging interaction the mc feel plain gamer excited of pokemon world with no much uniqueness, is hard to feel effort of pokemon, there barely training scene, and MC gain pokemon so easily, before first gym match he already get 3 with no much struggle. it good enough but not interesting enough for me.

so far its good and i got nothing to complain about, the zapdos thing and stuff is only annoying if your purposely looking for a problem, otherwise just enjoy it and you will. by the way sabrina is best girl in all of pokemon

This is garbage. He beats Zappos with base evolution starters. He has everything given to him. He face no real struggles. Only at 1.8 starts because of update stability

This is my Third 5 Star work, I hope it's a nice read as it was for my previous Fanfictions. It is a harem but with development not like catching girl every chapter.

need more chapters, the only issue i see is so minor that it isn't worth mentioning

this was just some cliche Pokémon story. too generic and not that exciting thing are going so much of a convenient for mc. the breaking point was he caught a zapdos with only basic pokemon. like bruh even if the zapdos was injured even the elite four may bot be able to defeated it not to mention just some basic starter pokemon

The work itself is cool and interesting to read. You can only make the main character's Pokemon battles and training so that, well, in principle, the Pokemon battles themselves appear longer and more exciting, and the training itself so that it is present, well, a little bit so that it is. You can take an example from one work about Pokemon Journey to Greatness in terms of Pokemon training and battles.

Sinceramente el MC cada capítulo que leo lo encuentro más estupido, esconde el tener pokemon legendarios a todos menos al equipo Rocket, supuestamente es una estrategia para pasar de incógnito.... Ah pero su ropa que usa para esconder su identidad y usar los Pokémon lo vio toda la compania silp Co..... y lo que más me molesta para que mierda llevo a Lorelei para que le diga dónde está moltres para después echarle para que no vea que tiene a los otros 2 ? Me parece lo más estupido de todos modos en el momento que vea a los 3 pokemon juntos en alguna noticia se va a dar cuenta enseguida quien es y que confia más en los villanos para guardar secretos que en los buenos