what can i say? i enjoyed the story so far. interesting background, power system, enjoyable dialogues and well, knights, swords, hordes and battles! so, all in all, quite good. looking forward to how the story progresses. one suggestion though; try to change the way people speak a little. for example, nobles could speak in a more sophisticated manner compared to knights and commoners, yknow by not shortening the words with apostrophes but writing the words out, something that the snobby elite also do in our world😁. for commoners, a smidge of broken english or making them use more shortened words like comin' etc. And for knights something in between. it would give your story a new level of divide between nobles that were trained from birth on how to behave and present themselves properly and the commoners who weren't trained in the ways of pompous mannerism. just a thought.
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Thank you for writng this review ♥️ The suggestion is great, but I’m kinda hesitant to try it. Some readers might find it weird to notice the sudden changes in the style, but let’s see. I’ll try to implement a few changes.
