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Nimil_pardeshi
Nimil_pardeshiLv125d
2024-11-26 04:25

it started good but dude is just telling how the whole game is played by this streamer for 10 chapters come on man are you for real if i want a play through i will go on twitch what is this and if you wanna show how good people are taking the game just do it in 1 or 2 chapters but no this author is giving this chick 10 full chapters to play through the game disappointing is an understatement.... world background is a good i like the concept very much but the execution of the whole thing is yet to deliver something that will keep me satisfied and wanting for more writing is like a normal AI on drugs not bad but still just read the chapter yourself first before posting it so many times you say they don't have this game in the world but everyone knows of the characters in that game it's just not good of a if it's an existing character that will be whole copy right issue and all you can't just pick up a character and make a game about it and make money out of it if that character already exists in that world I hope you get better at this whole thing i will be back after you drop a few more chapters and see

Becoming the Strongest as a Game Dev

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ImaginationGalaxy
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Written by AI, numerous inconsistency’s, terrible descriptions, name changes constantly. Read only if you want to lose brain cells.

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JerryI
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I agree with the author of the most popular review, what is written here is absolute nonsense, the author thinks that idiots are reading it, he doesn't care about the plot, the characters and the logic. There's not even anything to review, he took someone else's idea and took a shit, I feel very much for those who like it, I hope you are well fed in the hospital.

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FadeKnight
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What is fast becoming my favorite niche of fan-fiction. An isekai fantasy world where simulations are popular and functional and our culture and video games are shown to them. Here is 5 stars to keep you going.

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gustavo_hhhhdsd
gustavo_hhhhdsdLv1

Dropped in chapter 9, the chat reactions are really weird, apart from the way Scarlet talks, it's simply her jumping around talking, sad that the author doesn't write in his own words.

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Caedus_Aldric
Caedus_AldricLv13

The novel is pretty good i would say however the gameplay of ruby felt more like scarlet as a spectator rather than actually playing and hse only had one death which in my opinion someone who has played batman arkham first time is outrageous to think but okay some constancy issues read the chapters again for example : rent duration was end of the week took 3 weeks to make the game still end of the week rent due??? other than these munor issues it's pretty good story

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Izz_Inuendo
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It's not what you would expect. But it got the job done. Jk. Jik handyman

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Anthony_aguilar
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1 Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good

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Rainbow666666
Rainbow666666Lv15

I don't know if the author just put the original story in the ai blender and reuploded it here or just thought he could make it better.

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TheLazyCook
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its a good fic, you should the game marvels spuder-man its a good game especially the emotional end where peter chooses to save the city instead of aunt may ❤️

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