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2024-11-26 04:25

it started good but dude is just telling how the whole game is played by this streamer for 10 chapters come on man are you for real if i want a play through i will go on twitch what is this and if you wanna show how good people are taking the game just do it in 1 or 2 chapters but no this author is giving this chick 10 full chapters to play through the game disappointing is an understatement.... world background is a good i like the concept very much but the execution of the whole thing is yet to deliver something that will keep me satisfied and wanting for more writing is like a normal AI on drugs not bad but still just read the chapter yourself first before posting it so many times you say they don't have this game in the world but everyone knows of the characters in that game it's just not good of a if it's an existing character that will be whole copy right issue and all you can't just pick up a character and make a game about it and make money out of it if that character already exists in that world I hope you get better at this whole thing i will be back after you drop a few more chapters and see

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the author rewrote the chapters and i have dropped a new review this time The author has improved his writing style from old one so go check it out

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