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greyrolph
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2024-11-23 13:24

Nice story u got there...Hope u don't drop it !!

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GGFanfiction
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Already have 50 chapters translated. I just need to setup automatic upload and do a second editing round

machadogbc
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Will there be a paring?

GGFanfiction:Already have 50 chapters translated. I just need to setup automatic upload and do a second editing round
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cole1
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3.8 i'd give the writing quality more than just 3 stars if there wasn't snippets of Chinese (untranslated) in it. sometimes the mc is referred to as "Wu", sometimes the techniques like red and blue are "He" and "Cang" respectively. . as for updates? currently its obviously good, considering its only been out for like 9 days. and there are currently 50 chapters. (I'm at 30) . story development... at chapter 30 the mc is 5 years old and already graduated from academy but that doesn't really bother me since there'll probably be some time-skip or something (just a guess). . character design is alright I suppose. he isn't really sasukes twin but instead the middle brother or at least acts it. itachi is like 10 I think considering its said to be 3 years from massacre. satoru(mc) being 5, sasuke 3(?). i could be wrong about it and sasuke could be 5 too and I just missed something. mc's personality is pretty much gojo's but its not really that bad to me. oh yes, there's a system too but its not a bad one, not controlling. mc looks like gojo. . world background is a little iffy tbh. i had seen a paragraph comment where the author(publisher/translator) had called it an AU so some things might be more different than canon. orochimaru is in konoha still. some things are a bit off like how he is supposedly sasuke's twin yet it doesn't really seem like they are twins.. like at all. hmm... as for other things? its alright from what I can tell, nothing else seems to be off and it all seems to be mostly correct for the naruto world. . overall? its an alright binge read or to just burn some boredom, nothing amazing but its cool.

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