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LordKitty
LordKittyLv145mth
2024-11-23 09:22

I really like this novel so far. The writing quality is great, and I like the main character and the female lead. I think it has potential, and I would recommend it.

Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess

RashCore
4.6
232 Chs

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RashCore
RashCoreAuthor

Thank you for the review

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RashCore
RashCoreAuthor

My first review on this book, and I gave three stars to world background for a reason. You will get an abundance of romance and fluff in this one, however it takes some time for everything to unfold. Like how many nations are there, what is the time zone and all. It will take some time but I will properly design the world. Next, my fight scene writing has improved with this novel so you won't get the worst ones here. About harem, then a strict no. I update daily so a five star there. You will find a few spelling and phrasing mistakes here and there, but it hasn't been a year since I seriously started writing so allow me some time to improve. I try to give proper depth to each important character. Yes, it will take some time, but since the novel isn't going to be like 1k chapters, you won't need to wait for too long. Anyways, thanks for reading. Ask me any questions you may have.

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Vio_Zero
Vio_ZeroLv14

Slow down with the new stories I can only read so many bangers at time. My coins and fast passes are already stretched thin as it is with all the stories I read😭.

5mth
ShadedMoon
ShadedMoonLv14

I love it so far. It’s refreshing to see a good non harem novel on this app. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work author!!!

5mth
ShiroNeko280
ShiroNeko280Lv4

Author, I need more of thiiiiiiiiisssssssssss. Please update fast, otherwise...

5mth
Vortex_876
Vortex_876Lv2

I like this story.. Anyone would especially in this site full of Harem novel. It's good non-harem and Romance, Magic Fantasy based Story. Here's suggestion for you Author Change the Name and Cover into Something Good, Honesty I just clicked on this story to read reviews but after reading the Description, I thought of giving it a try and really liked it. Name and Cover seems like that of a Smut. I hope you will give this Novel an appropriate Name and Cover. Best of Luck, I hope this story doesn't get dropped and becomes popular. (Sadly I can't read more than free chapters because I am Broke.)

3mth
6_Kartik_Rawat_9
6_Kartik_Rawat_9Lv1

I read 36 chapters while writing this. Pros:- Fluffy Romance Yandere Sensible MC Wholesome Raiden shogun Cons:- No world building [like mc didn't even research about what this whole world is like flat or oval] Less fleshed out characters Needs more chapter

3mth
Alex_Guetta
Alex_GuettaLv15

Story is good overall, just lacking world building and mc being too much of a simp.

3mth
Eldeel
EldeelLv15

Wont lie the story is very cheesy and cliche. But it’s one of those books that makes me smile after I read it. Everyday I just enjoy chapter which is uploaded. Cause I love the interaction between the mc and Valarie. Its just so darn cute and wholesome. If you just wanna feel happy when you read a book, I highly recommend it.

3mth
Jacky_Donnie
Jacky_DonnieLv3

Just Sweet Novel. Two Yandere lovers. If you have read or watched Mobseka (Trapped in a dating Sim) , it's similar in starting but with Better MC. Only problem is Chapters are small and we need more chapters atleast 400 more.

3mth
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