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I_LIKE_SWORDSLv41mth
2024-11-24 18:54

Honestly, the writing and grammar need significant improvement. It's somewhat exhausting to read in its current state. I suggest using tools like Grammarly or even ChatGPT to correct the grammatical errors and refine the phrasing for clarity and readability.

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Nyarlathotepians
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thanks for your advice buddy. but shame that would be too troublesome. i don't even get payed here. so yeah basically just editing Chinese from mtl to make it readable. some took times for one paragraph. since there is some word that can't be translated. *specially names and tittles of some character*. Its here for hobby Buddy. but if you want something better then to pay me, for sure i will rewrite the incorrect grammar. peace from translator.

Alibi_Lullaby
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You can just copy the entire chapter into ChatGPT and ask it to fix the grammar and paragraph. it'd take like 10 seconds of effort and produce a better result for your reading and enjoyment 😊

Nyarlathotepians:thanks for your advice buddy. but shame that would be too troublesome. i don't even get payed here. so yeah basically just editing Chinese from mtl to make it readable. some took times for one paragraph. since there is some word that can't be translated. *specially names and tittles of some character*. Its here for hobby Buddy. but if you want something better then to pay me, for sure i will rewrite the incorrect grammar. peace from translator.
Nyarlathotepians
NyarlathotepiansAuthor

i will try, any recommendations apps?

Alibi_Lullaby:You can just copy the entire chapter into ChatGPT and ask it to fix the grammar and paragraph. it'd take like 10 seconds of effort and produce a better result for your reading and enjoyment 😊
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