The writing is decent—not amazing, but not terrible either. One of the main issues is the frequent use of time skips. It’s not the concept of time skips that’s the problem, but how often they occur without warning. This makes it confusing to follow the timeline, as it’s unclear whether months or years have passed. Based on the title, The Day-to-Day Life of Sephiroth, I expected more of a slice-of-life focus. However, the poorly timed skips take away from that experience. For example, one moment he’s planning a date with a girl, and in the next, two more girls are introduced, and they’re already very close to him. The author tends to skip over the moments that truly capture the essence of a slice-of-life story, leaving readers feeling disconnected from the narrative.
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LIKEand the way its written just feels like he is disconnected from the world itself the interactions with the people from the world are used as an afterthought he never does anything in the present instead the mc is oh by the way i killed a dragon and once saved a noble but that isnt important instead lets talk to this blacksmith that im familiar with who nobody cares about because i skipped the part where we first met
