Horrible pacing is all I can say. He goes from a weak little guy to the absolute strongest amongst humanity in 22 chaps (With his seven convenient slaves). All of his power was granted to him in the span of a couple of chapters and his interactions with the original cast aren't really interesting.
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If you want pacing just read the original man, this a FF the pace should be fast. And the MC isn’t one of the strongest in humanity he is one of the Strongest Masters, he can’t even kill a Saint by himself, and there no such thing as seven slaves I don’t even know where you read about it. If you want to leave a bad review at least don’t spread lies.
In the span of couple of chapters 3 years passed, if you want to read 30 chapters about the MC just walking in the desert or being tortured for 10 chapters then there is nothing I can do. And yes I know that I’m bad with writing interactions between characters, the reason being is that English is not my first language,that’s why I use chat gpt to edit it. But I also try to write my best, in the end I only wrote like one FF which I dropped?
