I have never read the original but I can confidently say this is amazing doesn’t seem to have any harem and mc is not op. Don’t get me wrong he’s not pathetically weak but it actually feels real. Another thing I would like to add is it’s dark but not edgy fourteen year old dark like the other fanfics I’ve seen. Sorry for the rant but I highly recommend this.
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LIKEThere's nothing romantic about it, there are little insinuations and exchanges of glances with Cynthia, but it's 1 or 2 times, for something like that to become a romance, I'd say it would have to be added about 3000 chapters hahah
Que lastima, personalmente, no leo historias sin romance, a no ser que sean impresionantes, hay varias historias oficiales así, pero solo una o dos fanfics, y jamás he leído una historia china, oficial o no, que este en esa categoría, por lo tanto, me saltaré está historia, y veré si el destino me permitirá encontrarla de nuevo después de algunos años, cuando mis gustos puedan, talvez, cambiar, aunque lo dudo mucho, gracias por tu información.
I don’t remember chapter five too well but for the no training part you have to remember he was an almost elite trainer before.
Yeah, and yet a newbie with a pokemon somehow, what 6 levels above Murkrow toys with him. The MC is a elite trainer, but Murkrow doesn’t have that experience yet, it hasn’t been trained to the extent shown. And neither should have Ekans, It doesn’t matter if Xander used to be a Champion level trainer, he shouldn’t have managed to train his Ekans to that point, not when Ekans has only green potential. So yeah, I’m considering dropping the fic. Maybe I’m being to cynical, I know I’ve read worse. But it just feels so… much worse here.
Oh you mean that. Yeah the beginning is rough and I wouldn’t say it’s peak anymore but comparatively I’d say a solid 4 or 4.5 it helps that they update regularly.