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2024-11-18 12:39

sorry for this shameless review, but as the author i have to do this ,you know. Also pls share your reviews too.you don't have to be shameless like me :) or maybe you can right? now the starting chapters are'nt that perfect but i can it'll improves as story goes on and as a sports based one there maybe people who are not able understand many things like the game actions ,sadly there's nothing i can do about that .

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