This novel comes with a new perspective, showing the magical side of ASOIAF, forming an independent story from the main line of story. I'm still frothing for new chapters, it ranks in top among hundreds of fanfictions I read of ASOIAF. For author, 1. You can introduce different level of meditation techniques,magic power system from warlock of magus world or similar novels, or you can have MC be the pioneer which I think will make the novel very interesting and long lasting. 2. If you're comfortable with names now can you change the name of the MC and his friends to more valyrian, and will MC have a surname like from his mother's side ,where she might come from an ancient main line of dragonlords which has gone extinct and these other dragonlord families are just it's branches, you can add these. 3. I think now that he is in asshai, you can make long volumes of how he becomes a pioneer of magic taking your time writing it out. You can even use Asshai language made by David peterson.

without a doubt the best Game of Thrones fanfiction I have read. I highly recommend it. I look forward to the next chapters and I hope the author will finish the story

Amazing book. Well worth a read :) a really unique take that ignores lots of common tropes in other books. Ty :)

The fanfic is very good but the narration is little slow for me

Hello everyone, I'm the author of this fic. Today, volume 1 was completed and I came here to leave my review for those of you who want to read the novel. After arriving in Valyria, the MC makes a huge effort to collect all the resources he can before the 7-day deadline ends. He is also preparing a ship and a crew for the long journey to Asshai. On top of that, he also has the system quests. While the MC takes care of all this, we see an incredibly rich and full of life Valyria through the eyes of other characters. Faceless men fighting against the cruel Blood Mages, crime lords, dragon riders, minor nobles, merchants, a woman who seeks revenge for her past, a Velaryon who did not flee to Westeros, and many other minor characters who experience firsthand all the consequences of the MC's actions in these last days of Old Valyria. If you don't like multiple POV then this is not a read for you.

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pretty interesting story that delves in the old valyria, hope to see more!

Amazing so far .

It would be amazing if you make your character Tzimisce unleashed ( with all the flash crafting and blood sorcery that it's vampires have), you know the one badass clan form the world of darkness franchise.