bro, didn't you say you will continue the original, and if you wrote another, why not in English

Bro, I was right dizzy when I read that because English is mixed up with your native language

You had good writing potential and had dedication, daily high quality uploads for a month wow, you were getting better and better, you could have made it great, but you just chose to quit and be lazy, i came back to see whether any updates but you ended up like those losers who start something but cannot finish, good luck with whatever you end up doing.

I guess I expected much. I thought that this rewrite would actually fix Kenichi's overall character but he is just the same generic nice guy. The only thing pretty much is just some added scenarios overall with no major actual changes. Kenichi is still a boring MC, some characters like Rito are turned into weirdos just to push the girls to the MC and again information is just explained terribly. Thought that the author could finally make a Side MC story in a Harem Work but it just didn't but turn him into the actual MC in a Harem.

Espero que al menos no cambie demasiado con la primera historia, después de todo me gustaba la anterior y sería una pena que está nueva reescritura no fuera tan buena como la primera, tocará ver y esperar que está al menos sea tan buena como la primera historia

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El mejor fanfic que he leído en muchos tiempo, me recuerda a un fanfic de majikoi que tiene como protagonista a un personaje pervertido y que era secundario como saruyama con un sistema que le obliga a combatir y ser fuerte