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2024-12-01 23:11

The novel's good so far, entertaining. The grammar is good (divine for someone whose first language isn't english), the plot isn't forced and the characters are portrayed well. The pace is a bit slow, but it's alright. The MC is a menace and Ayaka is just so cute. It's rare to see a Naruto fanfiction without a system or harem, keep up!

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Thanks for the review, man. Happy that you're liking it.

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