The story is ok but the translation is bad

Read it at your own risk. If you’re someone who understands English this story will give you an headache. But if you’re not a native speaker go ahead maybe you can even enjoy it, but just maybe

Didnt read it, just came to say: [Simplified Impregnation: Handholding!]

dogshit chinese

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I dont know how but you managed to make mtl chinese generic novels into shakespere's work with this novel of yours. Like bro what am I even reading? You should've let the AI do the work and even then it would turn out to be something readable.

The writing quality is going downhill from chapter 1.

The idea itself has potential but the actual execution is terrible, my advice is for whoever wrote this is to see how storys and novels are written and try learning from them at least .

This is NOT english if u are going to write a story in english do better my eyes watered trying to read this absolute trash.

Great concept ! But the grammer is horrible . I feel like he copy and past it from somewhere else . Since it randomly say advertisement throughout the chapter.