This is one of the worst things I've ever read ! The plot is completely absurd and meaningless ! The main character is hunted , his little brother is freely attacked , almost killed , he is practically being taken hostage by S.H.I.E.L.D. and he still seems to be the one in the wrong in the situation ? HOW RIDICULOUS . But it's very well-written and , as pathetically exaggerated as it may be , I really see this plot happening in comic books ( in fact , I'm sure similar things happen frequently in current comics ) .

1 star, this is what I'm giving this fanfic. First spoiler alert but I really hope you guys continue reading this, it saves your time. Okay MC went to comma for 9 months, his girlfriend(Betty grant cheats on him with ned, no one tells him until later which is to late, it's not MC fault and he just broke up with her later after crying, good for him. Now after waking up from comma he is with X-Men and then later shield comes for him because his mother is hydra and fury wants him to make up for it, MC doesn't accept and fury call avengers and then we have X-Men Vs avengers which avengers which I don't understand how it didn't end easily with avengers being defeated and with professor X power but whatever Also MC is not flash and he just so nerfed, so nerfed that he got manhandled by quicksilver, Scarlett witch for no reason fall in love with him Which also doesn't end up in anything and MC doesn't meet Wanda later. MC was held down while her niece got Sharp things into her body because of a grande. Yeah quicksilver, hero, a member of avengers and he didn't let him to save his niece, does this make sense to you? And then they say if you come with us we will heal your niece. I see no logic behind this fanfic, who knows maybe green goblin turn into some kinda of god in this fanfic and spider start stealing and the get hit by a truck and get isekai into another world. Honestly the story is so messy and bad, bad writing worse than flash arrowverse after season 3 and a flash more dumber than the any flash. Honestly saves yourself sometimes and just read something else.

This is easily one of the worst attempts at a villian storyline I've ever read. I know its difficult creating villians. lol but no character acts like their original counterpart in this. all actions are just made to help develop a villian. most actions make zero sense outside creating this villian. Its honestly really sad the author thought people would like this. Let's not start with his lack of powers or how the avengers acted toward his niece. if you have to pull shit like that then your story already failed. Everyone should run away from this story.

The writing quality is decent, but the plot is horrible. I mean, the guy is losing to normal-powered humans! It's just embarrassing how the author justified making the MC who has the speed force lose Hawkeye of all people.

Good story, bro. The tags are a little misleading, as he is not that op, but overall, this is a really good marvel fanfic one of the best on this website.