I really enjoyed the novel, but I feel like the MC comes off as too overpowered right from the start. It makes it harder to connect with him since there's so little known about his past or what development led him to this point. He ends up feeling more like an "Aizen wannabe" rather than having his own unique personality.That said, I absolutely loved the depth and realism in the backstories of the supporting characters. They added a lot of richness to the world and kept me engaged. I'm curious to see where you're going with the story and what you're envisioning for the MC’s growth moving forward.
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Fair his Past life has only been explored through the lenses of other people and I have yet to tell how he became like this. one of the reasons is claer from the first chaoter but more of his personality is yet to be fully explored
