The fanfic itself was meh to good at best but the rating has increased drastically because of the translation quality unlike the other one with a lot of inconsistency of the names of the characters and calling the university Dragon University(China) and with its many downsides its just plain annoying at some point but this... its even better the translation like more consistent than i thought and very few and almost nonexistent china related things so im giving it a 4.8 rating for simply having better translation quality and minus 0.2 rating for not having more translated chapters (Mostly Opinion Based)

it's Chinese book so it's not going to make any sense it will be good but author did good job on the translation than the other author. I'm gave up on the other author bad translation so I hope this author did better as the story develop more

I honestly didn't expect much from this book, not many have original ideas and many use their knowledge to make their elite level Pokémon killing machines (level 70) but I was very surprised by its main idea of ​​using a game boy as a cheater, for example . . At that moment I thought he would be the typical hacker who plays the villain or would have fun causing chaos with his illuminated resources but my surprise was different, although it is not completely the same, the fresh air is appreciated. It's a shame that it's a Chinese book but hey, don't give up, continue with it, it's good.

This story already been translated/ uploaded by Tempest_29

Story is really mid. There are a lot of Chinese elements in it, which I don't really like combined with Pokemon. There are a lot of moments in which story/dialogs just don't make sense. I think it's not authors fault, because translation is good and I would say it's the only saving grace of this fic. Just the original story was poorly written. A shame, because the concept with Game Boy as cheat code was really interesting at start.

I can't judge the writing or other details because I don't have the ability to do that, I only judge the story from a personal perspective. In my opinion, this story uses elements of "Pokemon Stories like in anime" which we know usually CN writers like to use "reality elements" in most pokemon stories, especially those set on earth visited by pokemon, I personally really like it without elements of reality that are too bloody or emphasize brutal things, the cruelty of the world or negative things from humans or human systems. For the Cheat, I have found it several times even though it is not from a pokemon story, but this story is very fun to read, I mean Reading Pokemon Stories is much better for relaxing the brain and body because that is the ideal Pokemon world that we know so far. I don't know if this is a translation but so far I really like this story 👍 very nice story ...

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olha autor a fanfic e boa nao tem veneno chines top amei mas o problema é que eu li em menos de 24 horas muito pouco capítulo ce e logo mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

La historia es buena, el uso de los elementos del juego es coherente, me gusta que los Pokémon legendarios no sean tan fácil de atrapar, el mejorar las MO (máquina Oculta) al derrotar Gimnasio y si a eso le sumas la excelente idea de que los líder de gimnasio te premien con conocimiento sobre los Pokémon que usan en los juegos, hacen que la importancia de estos gimnasio aumente. Me gustó que usara lugares importantes del juego como mazmorras, ya que encontrar Pokémon u objetos es más fácil. Usar la mecánica de plantar bayas raras o conseguir Pokémon con la habilidad Recogida para ganar dinero vendiendo objetos en el mundo real fue una buena idea. No encuentro atractivo el romance en esta historia, parece que el autor hará que se case con una líder de gimnasio que ni aparece y que probablemente sucederá para cumplir sus fantasías hacia este personaje femenino. Por todo esto si bien la historia no me encanta, hay muchas cosas que realmente me gustaron, espero que no abandones la traducción.